Reviews for What is Right: Year One |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Why was Hermione in the bathroom? Oo I KNOW it's not because Ron said no one likes her; That only hurts her if it's true, but this time around she has a friend. And a snide comment wouldn't hurt her ENOUGH to send her crying for a whole day. That requires your whole life to be friendless and shitty, which Harry stopped her from feeling. So what changed to make her upset enough to cry all day? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ironically, Lucius will probably (correctly in a super ironic way) interpret Harry’s behavior and malnutrition as signs of major abuse. Regardless of his stance, he most certainly would be furious and disgusted about a wizard being abused by muggles. It’s so twisted it almost hurts to think about how silly this situation could be. |
![]() ![]() ![]() To be fair, Voldemort had placed a taboo curse on his name. If you said it, he or Death Eaters appeared and killed the speaker and I think the people nearby. This was to cause everyone to be afraid of his name and so more afraid of him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm going to have to stop reading this one. I just can't believe Harry would be this weak helpless and pathetic After coming back in time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The waitress scene is funny. I am a waitress, and the other day I confused one of my tables bc I got their bread so fast. I’m a professionallol |
![]() ![]() ![]() your version is better than the travesty which was the 7th book. |
![]() ![]() Love the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm just reading along, enjoying the beginning; like yeah, I've read these kind of fics before (usually Naruto) and like them...then BAM! The feels! I was pretty damn apathetic reading it and suddenly, I was just like, damn Harry dying with Ron and Hermione is depressing. Real tears fell. Anyway. Good start. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE IT! Great job. Glad he was able to avoid Norbert and Fluffy. Glad there was a teacher to intervene with Qurill. Ahgg, Dumbledore. Once again, loved it. |
![]() ![]() Getting buddy buddy with what amounts to magical Nazi's...gross |
![]() ![]() Kind of wish I hadn't starting reading this wonderful story now that I've seen that the sequel is abandoned. I HAVE THE SADS NOW. |
![]() ![]() Nosy old biddie - why didn't she demand Harry's socks and underwear while she was at it? Why didn't Harry reply with a nice but firm, "No thank you" about the hat? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm guessing that he is writing in parsel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this, love you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved your story , now favourited! |