Reviews for What is Right: Year One |
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![]() ![]() Glad he remembered that he now has a pensieve (sp) and actually used it. I like how Albus is in full, manipulative-bastard, character. (Stories where he's "nicened'up" make me queasy, lol, b/c I know he's a pro-child-abuse asshole.) |
![]() ![]() I just had a really nice chuckle at the "Harry Potter information loop" going on between Draco, Lucius/Cissy, and Severus. It's...it's so cute! I know, I know - seriously subjects, but still. CUTE! Love how he told Hermione about his "dream" about Sirius/Peter. When's he going to dump a ton of memories to get them out of his head? |
![]() ![]() Harry's future-past "teacher" sounds like an asshole. The mental image of Harry reading to a group of little kids is awesome. |
![]() ![]() Yay for Hedwig! Would love to know why/how Lucius picked out that specific owl for Harry. |
![]() ![]() Awww, I've always loved "secretly good" Malfoys and this is a great start to them being the decent folks we've known all along that they could be. |
![]() ![]() I love all the different twists and turns! But...where is Hedwig? Was Harry able to go back and get her? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am one of your fiction fans .I think your fiction can give me a special feeling,a little bloody,a little sad and a little I want to ask you if i can translate your fiction into chinese ? In china ,there are a lot of people who really like HP but can't understand English well.I want to translate WHAT IS RIGHT。 It's beautiful. If you allows me to do it ,i will post it to some Chinese webpage that people there are very kind and nice. I am a chinese girl so don't care my poor English.I will try my best to translate it if you give me the permit。 Wait your answer! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! THIS WAS BRILLAINT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW wow i absolutely LOVE this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter brought tears to my eyes...so sad! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love a lot of this. Particularly the very last line. |
![]() ![]() Great the over used psychologically scared and tortured trope of fanfiction. Cause we can’t have a story without making things edgy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry, but I just got more and more pissed off the longer I read this chapter. Kidnapped, injured, held against his will, compulsion spells (basically drugged), a vast conspiracy where they refuse to tell him a fucking thing, then full-on incapacitation (agaiin, drugged) and a mental gang-rape that included Mooney. Apparent Stockholm Syndrome kicks in from the very earliest stages because of the grooming by Voldemort... and we're supposed to think this is a good thing? I just wanted him to FIGHT THESE ASSHOLES instead of just going along with them. |
![]() ![]() The nightmares made this story redundant |
![]() ![]() ![]() trash fic |