Reviews for What is Right: Year One
Guest chapter 12 . 9/19/2020
Glad he remembered that he now has a pensieve (sp) and actually used it.

I like how Albus is in full, manipulative-bastard, character. (Stories where he's "nicened'up" make me queasy, lol, b/c I know he's a pro-child-abuse asshole.)
Guest chapter 11 . 9/19/2020
I just had a really nice chuckle at the "Harry Potter information loop" going on between Draco, Lucius/Cissy, and Severus. It's...it's so cute! I know, I know - seriously subjects, but still. CUTE!

Love how he told Hermione about his "dream" about Sirius/Peter.

When's he going to dump a ton of memories to get them out of his head?
Guest chapter 10 . 9/19/2020
Harry's future-past "teacher" sounds like an asshole. The mental image of Harry reading to a group of little kids is awesome.
Guest chapter 9 . 9/19/2020
Yay for Hedwig! Would love to know why/how Lucius picked out that specific owl for Harry.
Guest chapter 7 . 9/19/2020
Awww, I've always loved "secretly good" Malfoys and this is a great start to them being the decent folks we've known all along that they could be.
Guest chapter 4 . 9/18/2020
I love all the different twists and turns! But...where is Hedwig? Was Harry able to go back and get her?
Ifafist chapter 1 . 8/26/2020
I am one of your fiction fans .I think your fiction can give me a special feeling,a little bloody,a little sad and a little I want to ask you if i can translate your fiction into chinese ? In china ,there are a lot of people who really like HP but can't understand English well.I want to translate WHAT IS RIGHT。 It's beautiful.
If you allows me to do it ,i will post it to some Chinese webpage that people there are very kind and nice.
I am a chinese girl so don't care my poor English.I will try my best to translate it if you give me the permit。
Wait your answer!
PrincessMagic chapter 19 . 6/2/2020
WOW! THIS WAS BRILLAINT!
PrincessMagic chapter 9 . 6/2/2020
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW wow i absolutely LOVE this!
mzkbogle3544 chapter 7 . 5/7/2020
This chapter brought tears to my eyes...so sad!
CyberWolfWrites chapter 19 . 4/29/2020
I love a lot of this. Particularly the very last line.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/3/2020
Great the over used psychologically scared and tortured trope of fanfiction. Cause we can’t have a story without making things edgy.
Fyrebird85 chapter 14 . 4/5/2020
I'm sorry, but I just got more and more pissed off the longer I read this chapter. Kidnapped, injured, held against his will, compulsion spells (basically drugged), a vast conspiracy where they refuse to tell him a fucking thing, then full-on incapacitation (agaiin, drugged) and a mental gang-rape that included Mooney. Apparent Stockholm Syndrome kicks in from the very earliest stages because of the grooming by Voldemort... and we're supposed to think this is a good thing? I just wanted him to FIGHT THESE ASSHOLES instead of just going along with them.
Guest chapter 11 . 3/29/2020
The nightmares made this story redundant
aries12345251 chapter 8 . 3/12/2020
trash fic
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