Reviews for What is Right: Year One
aries12345251 chapter 8 . 3/12/2020
trash fic
hdres chapter 14 . 2/29/2020
Such an interesting and inventive story. I am really enjoying it although I am pleased HP has finally received some help. Thank you for sharing your story.
hdres chapter 6 . 2/29/2020
I am really enjoying your story and the new HP. I like his more thoughtful approach to each situation. Thank you for sharing your story.
ChineseTakeout18 chapter 19 . 2/24/2020
This story is so amazing! I can't wait for the rest of the books!
Nobody chapter 2 . 2/14/2020
Actually, something can be "terrible, but great". I think it makes complete sense. It's just sounds like it's supposed to be together.
Blackbob chapter 2 . 2/12/2020
I love the last sentence. I love Draco. I love the hat. I love Hermione. I kinda love Lucius. I hate Dumbledore. I hate Ron. I love your story. I love you.
Blackbob chapter 1 . 2/12/2020
So, Ron and Hermione really died? I don't really like Ron, but in some fanfics he is just neccassary for literally everything. So...how is it?! Did they get a chance to change it, too?
Grrarrggh chapter 8 . 1/11/2020
Ex-Death Eater my ass. Yet another reason Dumbledore would never actually let Harry, let alone force him, into this. Too bad your story is so stretching the bounds of canon believability because it is well written.
Grrarrggh chapter 7 . 1/11/2020
Sooooo Harry was sent to an alternate reality? Because no way would the Malfoys be behaving like his in his world.
kagechqn chapter 13 . 11/1/2019
Is harry writing is paresltoungue?
Ruki88 chapter 6 . 9/30/2019
What is it with ppl always shitting on Ron in fanfics? Excuse me for the language, but what in Merlin's name is up with that? I think ppl see the movies and forget that Ron was an amazing friend to Harry, and definitely not a comedic relief moron that the movies portray. I swear, if it's something to complain about the movies this is one of my main pet peeves! The fic is really well written but this is something that I can't get passed. And I "love" how the Malfoys are just "misunderstood" and not, you know, dark wizards that were one of the main supporters of Voldemort. It's not like Lucius Malfoy slipped a dark object in the hands of an 11 yrs old girl that he knew could hurt or worse, kill her. Oh, wait...
Pteaset chapter 14 . 9/27/2019
I really like this story although I do hope at some point in time there’s an explanation to why all of these people and things that were evil are now trying so hard to be good
Pteaset chapter 1 . 9/26/2019
OK I’m on board I like it
duj chapter 11 . 9/23/2019
Snape trying to hide his broccoli is cute. Dumbledore enforcing his diet is intrusive, officious meddling. He has no right, not the tiniest shadow of a right to police the diet of employees. (Dumbledore and Minerva overstepping their authority like this is a particular bugbear of mine in fanfics.)
duj chapter 2 . 9/22/2019
Has Draco come back in time too? He seems older than eleven to me.

You wrote these early chapters before DH came out, didn't you? This Harry seems completely unaware that when Voldemort returns using his name *will* bring him (or more likely his servants) down on you.
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