|Reviews for Torn|
| AfterTheEpilogue chapter 2 . 11/13/2016
Ow, my heart.
| VioletAHS chapter 8 . 4/20/2016
That was... like, wow XD
| Summer chapter 4 . 4/19/2016
You should really just make a book out of this and publish it. Of course you'd probably have to change the characters names and that fact that it's supposed to be fanfiction (just for copyright reasons) but this is really an interesting story! :D
| Guest chapter 9 . 3/17/2016
It's beautiful. Thank you for writing such a beautifully tragic piece of art.
| Princess-of-the-Pen chapter 10 . 10/14/2014
This was the best story ever! I hope there's a squel!
| Princess-of-the-Pen chapter 8 . 10/14/2014
wha-what! This story just keeps getting better and better! How could this have happened without Danny's knowledge? OMG!
| Princess-of-the-Pen chapter 7 . 10/14/2014
I notice that you mix up cough and couch. you would say she laid on the cough and then say he couched for 5 minutes. Do you do that on purpose because it's suppose to be the other way around. Besides that I absolutely love this story.
| Guest chapter 8 . 11/30/2013
Please write MORE! I MUST KNOW MORE!
| sammansonrepilica chapter 10 . 4/18/2013
Very good i love this
| sammansonrepilica chapter 3 . 4/18/2013
Looks like danny is in love with a stripper
Just a joke i know she' works a magazine
| earlschibiangel chapter 10 . 1/12/2013
Very nice story over all.
| StupidlyGenius chapter 8 . 9/20/2012
| StupidlyGenius chapter 7 . 9/20/2012
allan ia adorable!
| StupidlyGenius chapter 3 . 9/17/2012
i wonder if you will even read these..
| StupidlyGenius chapter 2 . 9/17/2012
makin a author happy here!