|Reviews for One Week|
| hp-gw4e chapter 2 . 9/29/2007
i hope that you continue this story as it looks like you have got something here. :)
| rgfanfreak chapter 2 . 7/28/2007
| rgfanfreak chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
pretty good, i think this could use more detail, but than again i'm a detail freak, yeah, i look forward to seeing hwere this goes !
| potterlover chapter 1 . 2/13/2006
well over all good story but you need someone to edit the story. You have bad grammer sometimes. Try using the word was inplace of were.
| 5CANDALOUS chapter 2 . 2/5/2006
Good chapter, please update soon.
| Lisette Black chapter 2 . 2/5/2006
| Phoenix rulz chapter 2 . 2/5/2006
I like this has Update Soon
| macenzie chapter 1 . 2/1/2006
it was great plz add more
| WutevaChica chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
Very Promising. What the hell I sound like an old professor. Whatever. Its good and I'd like to know what happens next. Only thing is, when it switches pov's it confuses me for like a second, if you found a different way to change that would be good. But I like the story. Please Update.
| Lisette Black chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
I like it... but I need MORE! Lol. Keep writing
| Jim Stenvens chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
awesome, absolutley love it despite a few grammar errors
| BasilioBoy777 chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
Guess who's back. Back again. Rob is back. Tell a friend. Heh heh. Anyways, it's good to see that you decided to do a chapter fic for a change of pace. That's always a good thing. This seems to be going a good direction; you should go places with this.
Now, about the perspective change. I don't think the '-' thing is working. Either eliminate physical signals of POV change entirely, or find another way to do it. I suggest something like:
Ginny walked down the stairs.
Harry walked up the stairs.
Ginny looked out her window.
* (or whatever symbol you want to use)
Harry sat down at his desk.
That being said, keep up the good work my friend. Until next time!