Reviews for Alone
Aria Breuer chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
This poem was good to read.

I noticed some grammatical mistakes: in the fourth line, the word "when" needs to be added in-between "from" and "it". In the sixth line, the word "its" needs to have the "s" taken out. In the last line, the "ForI" should be separate as "For I".

Otherwise, I liked how you told Frodo preparing to leave Middle-earth from his perspective. This really makes me understand what he's going through. Nice work.

-Aria Breuer
me chapter 1 . 2/25/2006
You stink! Worst poem ever! Actually it was pretty godd, but you did say flames are ok. lol!
Astarot chapter 1 . 2/3/2006
There's one thing I have to tell you and is that you posted your poem in LOTR Spanish section, it may explain some things.

Probably you should change this matter.