Reviews for Affirmations
DevilinaCardigan chapter 1 . 4/22/2006
I love the last line. You're a great writer.
Katie chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
Oh. Cute. Awesome. :)

A
Shellster chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
Whoa. You have some fantasic talent. Great job.
Loony4moony816 chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
Oh WOW! That was AMAZING! You are such a good writer!

Sara
gerfan chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
thats so sad, but sweet, that he was trying to keep her warm, like the descriptions. I like the touching parts
hazelmom chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
Very nice. Visceral. Evocative. I really liked it. There are a few places where I couldn't see what was happening, but it doesn't take away from the mood of the piece. I can't wait to read another story of yours.

sheila
v-volatile chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
oh fucking hell. well DONE. i went to read your work because you left an Extremely Grammatically Correct Review, so i knew you would be a good writer. but this was excellent. the temperature motifs, the spare yet realistic dialogue. and you write without a trace, too! i won't get my work done tonight, i know. (excuse my lack of capitalization. sheer laziness.)
Angelfirenze chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
Told you I'd favorite it. *bright grin*
brynnamorgan chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
Love the writing style, your method of story telling. Excellent!
lkq chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
I like your style of writing in this - the randomness of thoughts tucked in seem fitting for a near-death experience, The descriptions are evocative and there are both dark and light elements throughout; it requires a bit more absorption than just a quick read-through allows.