Reviews for Personal Assistant
hinahime-hyuga chapter 9 . 8/15/2016
Please continue I need to know what happens at the end
Sandria Harris chapter 9 . 12/26/2015
Omg don't let this story die its too amazing.
Guest chapter 9 . 5/15/2014
Please continue! It's great!
Seraphina Dragon chapter 9 . 12/11/2012
hope to read more
kandita chapter 3 . 10/28/2012
kandita chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
If I'm correct(and I am 100% certain I am) Sasukes father name is Fugaku.
Guest chapter 9 . 7/5/2012
hehe, ha-HUM! Greetings. Who I am? Does it really matter? All that matters is you finish this story before I map quest your house. Trust me, the results of this? Not goning to be pretty. And yes, I have no life, so traveling out of my in-bred, backwoods, hillbilly town, county and state to track you down won't be an issue. And before i get into my full ranting and you change your outlook on this humble reader from "rude" to "jackass", do not take offense. I really enjoy your story, it has proper grammer, plot and you actually used YOUR BRAIN when writing this. I cannot express how annoying it is to want to read fanfiction, click on a story, and be assaulted by bad grammer, and some sex scenes thrown in there to make the illiterate writers feel horny and better about themselves. It's pathetic. These pathetic bimbo's should just do the public a favor, delete their brain-cell-deteriorating mash of words, and just become a talkative prostitute. It would save us avid readers, time, confusion, and blood pressure conditions if everyone did this.
umnia chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
pretty nice
Heart Of Darkness chapter 9 . 4/29/2012
THIS WILL NEVER BE UPDATED! T.T...(Great story though) T.T
astraea.12 chapter 9 . 2/23/2012
I ran out of chapters to read. :( I sure hope you continue this!
FrozenBitsNova chapter 9 . 9/18/2011
:D continue plzzzzz!
chiolo09 chapter 9 . 8/19/2011
this story is really good i love it! please continue!
SunnyJ chapter 9 . 5/10/2011
Oooh, cool story! I hope you update soon!
shynata96 chapter 9 . 2/14/2011
cool! please update!
Carrie chapter 9 . 2/11/2011
Hi, it's an entertaining story...

Sasuke is a bit OOC tho - I don't think he is even capable of admitting to himself that he loves her let alone telling someone else - he's supposed to be cold remember? (even tho the image of the kitten sleeping on top of sasuke was cute)

Also, I would imagine it would take time for sasuke to love someone - if at all. I don't think he would give up lifestyle the minute hinata walked into his house...

Hinata is made far to sensitive, just like many other sasuhina fics. Surely she would've grown a backbone by now - especially if she had the courage to leave home and live by herself.

You have made everyone around her "seemingly" love her - on which there was no foundation. Temari and Tenten I can understand, but definitely not the other two. Also, she can't be that innocent if she is... um, experiencing that intensity of lust for sasuke, it demonstrates that she is ... mature. It does'nt make sense.
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