|Reviews for Crescent Blitz: Clash Prelogue|
| margrave-of-the-stars chapter 2 . 6/1/2007
WOW. I like the idea sounds really good, I hope you update soon.
| BlakNites240 chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
It's called Prelouge, meaning it's a pre-story. So if Wiseass over there didn't scare her away, i think there will be a sequel. so nah. BTW, Outlaw? Will you stop trying to be the Anti-Wiseman
| Erich Sturmburg chapter 2 . 2/7/2006
Heya Pasonia, it's me SargeSagara back at the Initial D Xtreme Forums. Yeah. Noticed you did minor edits to it and the Singlish feeling is gone. Well, that doesn't mean the Singaporean feeling is no longer there. THe atmosphere is there, the tropical feeling is there, and wow... I didn't know our ECP and AYE had that many straights... Whoa... And nice job on the Suzuki Swift. Keep it up! But do check some of the grammars along the way and try to widen the vocabulary of words.
And yeah, The Wiseman, just leave Pasonia alone. He has ideas and the storyline to advance through and upgarde the story, but you, MR PURIST INITIAL D, have no idea what Pasonia wants to write. So, just get lost.
Hey, Pasonia, when is your characters going to challenge Takumi and such? XD I'll be waiting in the forum for updates! XD
| The Wiseman chapter 2 . 2/7/2006
Ok first off why...are...you...having...dialogue...like...this...it...is...annoying
Second does this have any relation to initial D at all, and no mountain racing does not count. If it does not somehow end up in the Initial D setting or deal with initial D characters then I'm afraid that this is just an original story and needs to be placed elsewhere