Reviews for Hearts in Winged Cages
neosword7 chapter 1 . 7/24/2015
have you made more chapters?
bleach1990 chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
can you do more this one looks good i would like if you found the time to make some more for this one it is very good
FairlyOddreader aka Neclea chapter 1 . 3/13/2011

I really love how you portrayed Timmy: with his nostalgia for Vicky, his curiosity about her thoughts, and "can we be friends this time?" was great.

The Vicky's mind piece was impressive, both the concept and Cosmo trying to open the cages.

Nice work and keep it up :)
The foxxx chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
well it is a good start any way i was looking fored to sume vicky x timmy romance maby in a sequil
Falconlobo chapter 2 . 3/5/2007
that was cute nice job
BioDragon chapter 2 . 8/17/2006
That was cool. Crazy, but cool. Nice work.
SisCo Kid chapter 2 . 4/7/2006
SHIBBY! I really wish there were more stories with this couple.
littlekittykat chapter 2 . 2/16/2006
no! not the end! the horror! no!*dies*
Mrs Turtle chapter 2 . 2/11/2006 cute!
GreenBird of BlueSky chapter 2 . 2/6/2006
Beautiful end, but would enchant to better see Timmy showing to Vicky the new features of Dimmsdale, and even as the other characters would react about their relation, serious enough comedian to see Tootie or Trixie flirt with Timmy and a jealous Vicky. I have hopes in which you animate yourself to continue your history.
Kasandra chapter 2 . 2/3/2006
Cute story. I think that you should continue because your stories are great. Keep up the good writing. :)
Teary Maystar chapter 2 . 2/3/2006
Cute; I rather enjoyed it.
Barry I. Grauman chapter 2 . 2/2/2006
Quite moving, 'mikari'! A very soft "mood piece" about Vicky and her growing fondness for Timmy (of course, being older than him, that's a story in itself!). Sure, she cares about him- people change- and it was beautiful to "see" those hearts floating out of those cages in Vicky's mind...Cosmo may not know too much, but he's wise in affairs of the heart, it seems...naturally, when he and Wanda popped back into the family portrait, he suddenly got a sneezing fit {"*don't you DARE...*"/"AH-CHOO!"/"Bless you, Timmy.."/"Hey, I didn't-'Timmy'?"/

"Did I say Timmy? I-I meant, blow your nose, Twerp!"/"HONK!"/"Well, at least you're still doing what'd you blow your nose so fast?"/"*thank you, Wanda*"/"*quiet, Durante, I want to hear what they're saying..*"/"*i'm

not Durante..*"/"*keep talking and I'll blow your nose up, too!*"/"Why are there MORE than two voices coming from the TV when there are only TWO people on the screen?"/"Er...cross-channeling?"/"Well, FIX IT!"/"Uh, yeah...okay, 'TV', KNOCK IT OFF!"/"Yeah, right, just 'talk' to it and...hey, it worked..."/"*who's Durante?*"/

*WHACK!*/"Ouch!"/"Who IS 'Durante'?"/"Probably got pummled by that lady wrestler over there."/"This is a romantic movie, I don't see any-"/"You know, Dimmsdale has changed in the past four years..."}.

Nice tender moment when Vicky and Timmy got close to each other and realized that...but I'm sure you'll delve more into that in your next story, 'mikari'! ;)

And yes, I do read FOP fan fiction, often leaving comments from time to time-but this is the first time I've even read one of YOURS here! Like I said, you don't "own" them, they're yours!
GoRon chapter 2 . 2/1/2006
Vicky/Timmy fluff even if Vicky is in denial is still great. Seems she has been missing her twerp over the years. That and the fact that she has already fallen hard for Gah can only be making things harder for her while she's around the strangely Gah-like Timmy Turner. Timmy's not always the most sensitive guy around (though he often is), so the mindscape thing is a great way to clue him to Vicky's feelings. Of course now that he knows he couldn't help but give himself an edge thanks to Cosmo and Wanda. Glad to see that you didn't carry the fluff too far, it would be too early for much more than what you already have.

It'd be perfect if you would continue this, like a chapter a day over Vicky's week long stay. I can hope for it at least. :)
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