Act 3 scene 1

Hahahhahahahahaha xD

LOL xD

totally hilarious!

OH that's so funny! I like.

very funny,a bit like a modern day version of that paticular scene.

Wow, that was great. A little Shakespear and a lot of crazyness never hurt anyone, lol! I'm not sure what scene that is, (haven't read it in about seven years), so I hope someone else could supply the answer. I'm going off to read your CatCF stories now. Talk to you later!

Act I Scene I.

Oh...well...:coughs: my my. I liked it! but the whole Romeo thing, you made him sound gay the first time he talked! but other than that it was pretty good. best line- *They fight*

nice re-write. but there could have been more drama to the part whhere Romeo was telling Tybalt that either he or him or both of them should go. other than that, brava

You did this for school, didn't you? I remember doing it a long time ago. All in all, funny and fairly accurate. And this is a scene from Act 3 or 4. I don't really remember anymore.

Why Hello! Ha ha hardy ha! This is a very funny, very ish way of re writing the scene, it is one of my fav scenes in the play cos mercutio goes a tiny bit spazzo. Ha ha ha. Well, they all go a bit spazzo in the scenes, but hey! Yey! Spazzo scenes! haha. This was a very entertaining version of events. Thank-you! Oh, and you actually re-wrote Act 3, Scene 1. Totally Groovey, yummy cookies. Have Fun...

It'd be cool if someone had far to much time on their hands and wrote out the entier play like this

I woul do the hula...

cute! i thought this was pretty funny, I love the joke when Mercutio said, "No, I just have a small gash the size of Rhode Island". That was smart! I liked it, and it really portrayed the scene in modern English. By the way, the scene that you rewrote is "Act 3 Scene 1" of Romeo & Juliet

Re-write the death scene!