|Reviews for Mai Hime Chronicle|
| Nessie-san chapter 2 . 1/21/2011
Good chapter. It was cute and funny - You had one mistake, though. You accidentally put a verb (can't remember which one, sorry) into present tense instead of past tense. It was something about Mashiro-chan looking out her window...anyway, you accidentally used an "s" for the ending instead of a "d." Those are all the notes - Good job, shanejayell-san -
| Nessie-san chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
Only one note: I think you forgot that you'd called Natsuki a "dark blue haired girl" in the second paragraph by the time you got nearer to the end, because you then called her a "black haired girl." Just a tiny continuity problem, but you might want to fix it - Good job, by the way.
| Teresa Kaiju chapter 6 . 6/13/2010
Worth several good laughs
| Teresa Kaiju chapter 7 . 6/13/2010
| Raineel chapter 7 . 6/9/2010
I am never going to see Haruka as the same person...or Yukino (candy boy). Uhh I can't believe it...sounds so crazy xDD
Very good fic, Shane -yawns- a very good way to start my morning
| Hallwings chapter 2 . 5/19/2010
Did Mashiro and Fumi really do it?
And if they did, how exactly did they do it?
Anyways, this story looks good.
| Teresa Kaiju chapter 5 . 8/4/2009
The story and characters so far are reasonable and enjoyable to read. Good work!
| Midori-Sensei chapter 7 . 8/3/2009
I was more than amused by your stories.
In fact, I'd like to see each of them continued.
They're beyond interesting, and the first four seem like they really happened.
You did I very good job in writing them.
Plus your stories about Nao.
I must say, I didnt find her that interesting of a character before I read your stories.
XD She's probably one of my favorites now.
So thanks for that.
Please update soon.
| Spikesagitta chapter 7 . 8/3/2009
interesting, i wonder if this will be continue more than a one-shot..? :)
| natsuki91 chapter 6 . 2/1/2008
wow this is an amzing story and i can't wait ot read your next chapter
| wtfc chapter 6 . 11/8/2007
yay you updated! the shiznat interaction and the descriptions were really nice. i was really into the story.
| lindred chapter 6 . 11/8/2007
i like it. i hope you update much sooner than usual.
| JJ chapter 6 . 11/7/2007
I really like the Nao/Mizuho story...I hope you can continue with that~ )
| Spikesagitta chapter 5 . 7/21/2007
oh? this is interesting, i always had a soft spot for Nao, she's pretty vicious given the chance! of course you gotta like her attitude too
lol! bad pun
| anon chapter 5 . 7/20/2007
Yes, more please! This promises to be lots of fun.