|Reviews for Defying Fate: Journey of the Offworlder|
| Foreman88 chapter 14 . 1/30/2015
Killing curse. Why did he not use it on Ultima? Ugh. Can't read anymore.
| Foreman88 chapter 13 . 1/29/2015
Let's go into their sim rooms where they can record us and find counters to our abilities! Yay for idiot Harry!
| Foreman88 chapter 12 . 1/29/2015
Again Harry is stupid. Accio Harry's trunk, not just trunk... And you used that bout of stupidity to get him into the blitzball game just so you could do something similar as the ff10 game? Sigh. This is something authors should NEVER do: use excuses simply to make certain events happen. Stop focusing on what you want to happen, and instead focus on what your characters would do in those situations. If you are going to make a character stupid, then make them stupid. Don't use random bouts of it that have no reason to be there.
Inpendimenta instead of stupify. Reason: casting Seth.
Not paying attention while he was invisible by the SeeD. Reason: Andrea
Not keeping a journal/copy of his memories even though he was told GFs instigate amnesia. Reason: Harry will likely forget something in the future that will be important.
Using crucio instead of the killinh curse on seth. Reason: Seth
Accepting a sacrifice from a man he does not know. Didn't even ask if he was sacrificing his soul. Reason: He is going to lose something that would have made any future confrontations with enemies much easier.
These are just the ones I remember off the top of my head. Please tell me that the excuses stop! This could be a really good story without them.
| Foreman88 chapter 9 . 1/29/2015
Why does everyone make Harry into an idiot? So very frustrating to read.
| Selias chapter 2 . 11/1/2014
Why the hell would snakes have a written language?
| Neko-Mitsuko chapter 1 . 10/19/2014
I think you meant minotaurs not miniatures which just means a scaled down size.
| SlickRCBD chapter 40 . 2/6/2014
It's been 7 years since you claimed you were not abandoning this fic and no updates. Are you sure it isn't abandoned?
| redrovaredrova chapter 40 . 9/25/2013
So, it's been about six years since this story was updated. Whatever happened to "this story will not be abandoned"? It's rare to find a story filled with OCs that are actually likable...
| Guest chapter 40 . 6/30/2013
Well yeah it's been a while huh? I told you I wasn't gonna abandon this fic, just that I had a lot going on, and playing WOW (World of Warcraft) takes up a lot of time when you let it, sorry about that I really am, on top of that I had a nasty nasty case of writer's block, but the creative juices seem to be flowing again and that's good. There isn't a lot left in this part of the story maybe eight to ten more chapters depending on how much content I get into each chapter. Again I'm not abandoning the fic, it might be a little while before I update again, but I am going to try to get antoher chapter out before this fic has another birthday, I might even get one out before New Years, but I'm not promising anything. Please Leave me a review I appreciate them and they do motivate me to keep going, I probably lost some readers by taking so long though. Until next time guys.
| Golden Silver Kelina chapter 14 . 4/23/2013
Please dont tell me Zidane is a bad guy ik he's a mischievous kid
But dont make him evil and if he is a bad guy please tell me he'll turn good like beatrix did eventually
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/23/2013
When r we getting to ff9?i thought zidane would be the main character
| Guest chapter 30 . 11/26/2012
That ended up almost the exact same as the situation with Ron. The only difference is he knew something was going to happen but he didn't do a damn thing to prevent it. He had weeks to do something but he just kept putting it off. She could of killed the rest of the group and it would of been his fault for being a procrastinater. Also you really need to have him win a major fight without getting his body shredded or going into a coma. Love your story otherwise though. Very creative and interesting.
| 6foxtrot9 chapter 35 . 7/15/2012
Finally found it! First fanfic I ever read, was way back in 06! Pity its dead...
| Shin1gam1 chapter 40 . 12/18/2011
| lightwater chapter 38 . 7/9/2011
Hey man just wanted to let you know that I'm still following this story and not going to give up on updates. (I've already reviewed the latest two chapters which is why I have to go back to 38) It's definitely my favorite FF/HP crossover and I've been very impressed with how you've tied together all of the various Final Fantasy plots into one, as well as making it cohesive with the HP storyline. It's turning into quite the epic and it would be a great shame to see a story with such potential go unfinished. I hope your personal/real life is doing well, and you should always put that before fanfiction. But that being said... please update!
Also, if you're looking for a beta, I wouldn't mind helping out.