Reviews for Little Piece of Heaven
asdfjkl chapter 26 . 9/20/2013
*slow claps*
*claps faster*
*claps extremely fast*
oxsilvermoonxo chapter 6 . 9/18/2013
haha. this is so cute. i love it.
oxsilvermoonxo chapter 3 . 9/18/2013 this story. so let me tell you a story really quick...once upon i time i got sick of waiting for naruto to come out only to be met with week after week of bratty bitchy sasuke and nothing else so i stopped reading at around chapter 300 something. Then a piece of fanart led me to a link of chapter 616 and goddamn it was SO GOOD and i got all caught up (sort of) and now i'm craving grown up saku/sasuke fanfiction all of a sudden and i absolutely love your story so far.
I am SO excited for what's to come in the next chapters! So far i think the characters are really well defined and their actions make sense (and you've given enough clues that we can guess what sasuke's thinking, even with sakura remaining oblivious, which i think is fantastic writing). I agree, i hated sakura in the beginning, and i hated sasuke while he was on his hellbent path of revenge, but now that they've both moved past that i am giddy with fangirl-ism (ironically). anyways, thanks for writing this story! can't wait to keep reading :D
anonymouse chapter 26 . 9/7/2013
omg this is just so awesome! I really liked the way you ended it too! I feel that would be what Sasuke would really do :) Hope you continue to write more awesome stories! :)
Purpleriver13 chapter 26 . 8/30/2013
Thank you Thank you Thank you for writing this story. I've reread it twice in one sitting. I love the ending too :)
Wintersocold chapter 26 . 8/22/2013
Thank you from the bottom of my heart for writing this story! It took me a while to read it but I didn't mind at all.
It's the best SasuSaku fanfic I've read so far! And the way you ended it... just awesome! You didn't make Sasuke fall for Sakura immediately, no, you keep the suspense till the very end and that's something I really appreciate as a reader. And the gesture of taking her hand is more meaningful than any 'I love you' Sasuke could possibly say (and we all know that a fanfic when Sasuke says 'I love you' isn't so plausible). For me it's the perfect way to understand how their relationship is gonna develop from now on.
And there were some phrases that left me completely laughing out loud, especially the conversations between Naruto and Sasuke. I don't remember the chapter exactly but it had some epic stuff over there... and that 'dobe' thing... hilarious!
Congrats for writing such a good story! You've made a huge SasuSaku fan really happy.
TraptWolf94 chapter 26 . 8/19/2013
I've read this story at least five times since you have completed it. Easily the best in the sasuke and Sakura domain. Fanfiction needs more writers like you!
1234dghgfj chapter 26 . 8/9/2013
Is it finished? It looks like it.


Guest chapter 26 . 8/8/2013
good ;)
Guest chapter 26 . 8/7/2013
To the jackass anonymous reviewer who had such a problem with this story's grammar: "additionally" has two L's, and sentences require commas to separate clauses. Since you know so much better than the writer and all.

Ignore that dickhead, Leanne. Christ. You're a fantastic writer, and this story is beautiful.
Anonymous chapter 18 . 8/4/2013
I really like this story, but when you edit it (if you do) please, please, please remove 99% of the ellipses( ... )! It really messes up the flow for me and I couldn't even find a block of dialogue that didn't use one.

Additionaly, it's "supposed" not "suppose." you made this error very often.

Finally, in front not infront. It's two words!

I honestly and truly love this story. It's my second time reading it! But it would be so much better if you fixed these mistakes!
gurdianofearth chapter 4 . 7/25/2013
I love how you made Sakura so strong willed!
Mrs.Uzumaki chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
Aw, nice story so far! :)
Langa chapter 22 . 7/19/2013
I like your story it was great when I read it the first time, but now I feel that there is too much action and drama but not enough romance between Sasuke and Sakura. I still like the story.
Renata Okami chapter 13 . 7/17/2013
haha sasuke got a boner
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