Reviews for Little Piece of Heaven
TraptWolf94 chapter 26 . 8/19/2013
I've read this story at least five times since you have completed it. Easily the best in the sasuke and Sakura domain. Fanfiction needs more writers like you!
1234dghgfj chapter 26 . 8/9/2013
Is it finished? It looks like it.


Guest chapter 26 . 8/8/2013
good ;)
Guest chapter 26 . 8/7/2013
To the jackass anonymous reviewer who had such a problem with this story's grammar: "additionally" has two L's, and sentences require commas to separate clauses. Since you know so much better than the writer and all.

Ignore that dickhead, Leanne. Christ. You're a fantastic writer, and this story is beautiful.
Anonymous chapter 18 . 8/4/2013
I really like this story, but when you edit it (if you do) please, please, please remove 99% of the ellipses( ... )! It really messes up the flow for me and I couldn't even find a block of dialogue that didn't use one.

Additionaly, it's "supposed" not "suppose." you made this error very often.

Finally, in front not infront. It's two words!

I honestly and truly love this story. It's my second time reading it! But it would be so much better if you fixed these mistakes!
gurdianofearth chapter 4 . 7/25/2013
I love how you made Sakura so strong willed!
Mrs.Uzumaki chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
Aw, nice story so far! :)
Langa chapter 22 . 7/19/2013
I like your story it was great when I read it the first time, but now I feel that there is too much action and drama but not enough romance between Sasuke and Sakura. I still like the story.
Renata Okami chapter 13 . 7/17/2013
haha sasuke got a boner
CrystalBud chapter 5 . 7/17/2013
i like how your bringing Neji into it XP
CrystalBud chapter 4 . 7/17/2013
poor sakura, this is an interesting story :D
CrystalBud chapter 3 . 7/17/2013
this is awesome!
10ShizukaYuukiMistress10 chapter 9 . 7/14/2013
This story is so well written and addictive that i couldn't put it down! I love your writing style and the story-line so far, great story! Its AMAZING! :D Kawaiii SasuSaku 3333
thebestsongwasntthesingle chapter 26 . 7/14/2013
Favorite sasusaku ever 3 .
Terahlyanwe chapter 26 . 7/10/2013
Nooo, Sakura! Kick his ass! He doesn't respect your boundaries, doesn't respect you as a shinobi, doesn't respect your opinion or judgement, so kick him to the curb!
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