Reviews for I'll Fight For You
Guest chapter 44 . 8/11/2020
Great story, I enjoyed every moment of it and the development of the relationship between James and Lilly is very well done, not rushed and it actually gives us a clear picture of what is going on in our characters' minds and, most importantly, hearts. As with all the fanfiction regarding James and Lilly, I find myself crying like a baby when we reach that faithful Halloween night, this happenes because we get to know the two of them in a deep and meaningful way: in the books/movies, James and Lilly are just two random characters and the reader doesn't really grow to care for them for they are already dead it's even worse, the only memory we see of James is when he is bullying Snape and acting like a git so the reader doesn't really grow to like James, let alone care. We always think of James and Lilly in regards to Harry when we consider how unlucky and how unfair it was for him to grow without the love of two wonderful parents that are there to support you in your darkest our and to celebrate with you in the brightest, but we never think on the line of "poor James and Lilly, the were so in love and they enjoyed it only for a few years before they died, they have never seen their soon grow up in the great man we know he becomes etc..." What I am trying to say os that with these kind of fanfiction we get to know the two of the and we get to CARE for them so naturally, when they die and we see it from their prospective, it hurts just as much as when Sirius died, actually even more. I love the two of them so much and it always breaks my heart when I read a beautifully written description of that night such as this one. In the end, thanks for the great story and plot, thanks for your hard work and perseverance and for finishing the story, but most importantly, thanks for making me care and for making me cry like a 5 year old that has just dropped his ice cream.
user1506 chapter 44 . 5/13/2020
hey so u probs won’t read this because i’m pretty late but ur story was great ! i loves the gradual progression of jily, u didn’t rush it like so many others do so it kept me hooked the entire time. i also loved that there was a overlying plot, so the story wasn’t just based on arguments and making up and all thatthere was an actually good climax and resolution and great plot twists too ! i also loves that you used luna’s mum as one of lily’s friends- i’ve never seen it done before and i really liked it .. it makes sense too ! anyways congrats on a really great story i loved it a lotta lot !
Guest chapter 44 . 10/10/2019
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queengryffindor chapter 32 . 8/8/2019
WHAT DO WE WANT?:JILY, WHEN DO WE WANT IT?:NOW
Guest chapter 42 . 4/21/2019
WHAT THE F...,,,,
Guest chapter 35 . 4/21/2019
NOOOOOOOOO! Why did you do that?!
Fayejase chapter 7 . 3/25/2019
This story is a little too AU and wacky for my taste. Interesting, but I tend to gravitate towards more cannon pieces.
NarangSehar chapter 1 . 11/28/2018
Ohh woww.. just the first chapter and you have me hooked on. lots of love
Guest chapter 1 . 11/20/2018
Good start
MidnightDawn the Youtuber chapter 44 . 10/19/2018
I AM CRYING RIGHT NOW

this story was so sad but sweet at the same time...though I wish I hadn't read the last chapter because I know James and Lily die but after getting to know them...its just...There isn't a word for it...sadness...but more than just sadness...

but on a happier note really good story and a GREAT PLOT I like how James sabotages all of Lily's dates (well more like hates her boyfriends but still...) the plot twists! and everything else!
Chysvo chapter 28 . 8/8/2018
I really really like this story but I just really really want lily and james together already!
Emmasnaillll chapter 44 . 6/22/2018
It was a beautiful ride from the start to the finish, and I loved the development between JILY’s relationship, and I absolutely loved the plot. Great job!
Guest chapter 44 . 5/16/2018
Goosebumps, best story ever
alittlebitofcringe chapter 44 . 3/28/2018
okay so I read this story YEARS ago but i just got an account, so let me just take this chance to tell you how much I LOVE this story. Like i can't get over it wow... You're characterisations are on point, and you manage to write a fic that explores james and lily's relationship but also has another plot (and an extremely clever one at that) Thanks for ruining my life with your unbelievably amazing writing :))
Guest chapter 44 . 9/3/2017
It's amazing. Definitely the best I've read.
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