|Reviews for I'll Fight For You|
| D00rFr4m3 chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
This story is amazing. I went through the whole thing. But realized I never reviewed the last chapter. I LOVE how you set it up to be Lily's life flashing before her eyes. And how you worked all the piece together. A story,to me is like a puzzle that someone makes. If its made badly,the pieces won't fit. If it's made right,all the piece are just perfect. Its awesome how at the end,you incorparated what Rohan said about Grace and Hope's bond. The mother and child thing. Its SUCH a tearjerker of a story. So sad...I can honestly say,this is one of my favorite stories of all time. J. couldn't have done it better herself!
| livibug chapter 44 . 2/24/2011
Oooooooohhh I loved that! I dunno if it's just me, but epilogues are my favorite parts in fanfictions, especially Lily and James ones, because they're so sad but so sweet and perfect and they make me happy and sad at the same time. But maybe that's just me. Anyways, I loved this story. I neglected a lot of hw to finish it tonight. So thanks! (that wasnt 100% sarcasm either, just so you know)
| D00rFr4m3 chapter 44 . 2/22/2011
Damn. I'm bawling my eyes out. That was sad. Pretty,but sad. This I can honestly say,is the best fanfiction I have EVER read. I might have to read it again. Not now though. I still haven't found out if you've made a sequel. :) I seriously hope you did. Count on me remember this. I loved this story. Most of them center around James and Lily falling in love. This one actually had a background story for it. It was long as hell too! Alot of people might disagree with me,but I think the longer,the better! I won't ever regret using up these 2 days it took me to read this. In fact,I doubt I'll regret using the other 2 it'll take for me to reread it. You should seriously consider a career in writing! J.K. Rowling couldn't have done it better,which is truly saying something!
| D00rFr4m3 chapter 35 . 2/22/2011
This is...amazing. definitely the best fanfiction I've ever read. Its got an actually story. Instead of just what happened to James and Lily. Its an actual story. And a damn good one at that.
| D00rFr4m3 chapter 32 . 2/22/2011
I hope James kicks Rohans ass. Thats all I have to say about that.
| LilyHeartsJames chapter 44 . 2/18/2011
Wow. I remember a couple of years ago wondering when the hell you'd ever update. And then you did and I couldn't read the newer chapters because I didn't have access to internet. And then I got the internet and read your story straight away. AND LOVED EVERY SECND OF IT! You're a really talented writer and I absolutely love this story and your style of writing, so never, ever give up.
Also thanks a bunch for giving me motivation to continue my own story. You're awesome :D
| Cplehg chapter 4 . 2/14/2011
The floo connection is not the only wizarding way to travel. You could also apparate or use portkeys. Why didn't you include it in the story?
| Windsor's Resident Elvendork chapter 44 . 1/29/2011
You finally finished writing it, and I finally finished reading it. I just..I can't even. I still have tears pouring down my face from the last portion of the story and my hands are shaking as I type this. My last review for this amazing story.
You might notice that this is a month late, but I couldn't bring myself to read it. To read the final chapter and knowing that was it, that was the end. I didn't want it to end, and so I saved this. Today I finally decided I could wait no longer and that I was ready to say goodbye. And well..I guess I'll start off with my favorite lines:
1."What's the matter, Lily?" Grace asks, grinning from ear to ear, and waving her bloodsucker lollipop in front of my face.
GRACE!GRACE!GRACE! That's all that went through my head when I read that. I knew that she was alive and would be ok, but to see her back at Hogwarts and just being her old self..GAH!
2."So, says the girl that dragged us into a mausoleum," James mutters under his breath.
This made me snort X)
3."But you two on the other hand," Grace continues, "you're always kissing each other and getting caught snogging half clothed in -"
Oh merlin Gracie, TMI!
4.I giggle at the looks on our friends faces who are all watching us. Twisting around on the bench, I make a show of grabbing his Gryffindor tie; violently yanking his face down to my eye level. James dramatically bends me over backwards as he kisses me, and I move my hands up and down his back like I'm in a wild frenzy of passion.
-has to clutch desk to keep from falling over in laughter- I can picture this and it is just so perfect!
5."My eyes! My virgin eyes!" Sirius gasps, shielding his eyes. "Look away my naïve friends this could get explicit and pornographic!"
-continues laughing- Oh right, Sirius. I have sirius doubts that you have innocent eyes.
6."Oh, shut up!" he says to Grace and Sirius when they start making retching noises. "If you had to wait seven years to snog the girl that you fancied, I think you'd be all over her too."
"Maybe," Remus says mischievously, looking at Sirius. "If he had some Gryffindor courage…"
Oh Remus! Did you just go there? I think you did!
7."Oh, really?" Remus drawls. "I beg to disagree, Padfoot. I think that there is one girl here that you've always wanted but that you're too frightened to approach."
Remmy! -turns to Sirius eagerly awaiting the answer-
8."Okay, fine. I admit it!"
Ahh! What? Say it! Say IT!
9. James's hand tightens around mine as we all look at Gracie. She's so focused on Sirius that she doesn't notice that she's pouring pumpkin juice instead of gravy onto her mashed potatoes.
Oh Gracie, bless your soul
10. "I admit that secretly…" Sirius lowers his voice so that we're all forced to lean closer.
11. Grace is so far over the table that I'm pretty sure she's got mashed potatoes down the front of her robe. "Secretly… I'vealwayssortofhadathingfor… Professor Trelawney.
WHAT? -bursts into laughter- SIRIUS!
12. James spits out his pumpkin juice, spewing it all over Peter Pettigrew who's just arrived.
Oh I love you James :D
13."Have you lost your mind?"
"Padfoot, she's bat shit CRAZY!"
"I know," Sirius moans, dropping his head into his hands. "It's always the ones that are completely mad that drive me insane." I could've sworn that he peeked between his fingers at Gracie.
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
14. "I've sent her a valentine every year. Even tried to proposition her once, but she kept telling me that I had a loveless life of betrayal and loneliness before me," Peter recalls miserably.
First part of this made me lol. The second part made me wince, my stomach fill with a cold dread, and just PETER!
15."Yes, Graciepee?" Sirius asks, gazing up at her and batting his eyelashes girlishly.
Oh Sirius. Never change.
16. It's James's adorable pout that finally breaks me. Damn him; he should have came with a warning label.
What would the fun in that be ;)
17. "Here we go again," I whisper to James, reaching for my wand in case things get ugly. But my wand is forgotten as Sirius does something he's never done before. He kisses her.
AHH! -cue me running around in circles and punching the air- Hell to the yeah! FINALLY!
18."You drive me bloody insane when you get mad like that becauseyoulooksofuckinghot," he blurts out so quickly that I'm not sure if anyone understood him.
-rolls around laughing- I can't believe he just said that.
19. "FINALLY!" I shout. "It's about damn time!"
My feelings exactly Lily!
20. FOUR YEARS LATER - OCTOBER 31, 1981
The second I read that the tears started queuing up and then the whole part following was a blur of endless crying and heart-wrenching sobs.
I can't believe that this story is finally over and that I will get no more updates for it. This was one of the first fanfictions that I ever read and it has remained one of my favorites, and definitely my favorite Lily/James. I will for sure read anything else including these two or anything else that you write. Every word was wonderful, every moment of love, friendship, and heartbreak a treasure.
So I thank you so very much for sharing this story with me and all of your other wonderful readers. So, for now, I guess goodbye. Thanks for everything :D
| MarauderWriter101 chapter 44 . 1/17/2011
I m thinking I didnt review this so- Wow.
I am so very impressed with this and how you concluded this fabulous story.
I will keep my eye open for any other HP works by you!
| chkn chapter 44 . 1/11/2011
Wow. I started reading this fanfic yesterday after my sister spent 5 hours at the computer reading, I got so curious I just had to read it, all I can say that you that you created magic. i loved it, right from the prologue I was drawn into the life of lily potter and i laughed, cried along with the story. It was so romantic and I really wish you could have kept going, it took me less then 24 hours to read it and one long sleepless night,
- rumer, aka. SomethingWithMittens
Oh and i think you could give alot of the people on here right J&L fics a lesson.. you'be inspired me to write one with my sister and we'be already finished our first chapter.. its short and not great but, its called It's not easy, love.. by TheForbidding (my sister)
| Graci-and-Cheri chapter 4 . 1/10/2011
LOL! I was like soooo worried it was a Death Eater, and then it was Sirius! I wuv you Sirius!
Luve it! Can't wait to click the next chapter!
| Graci-and-Cheri chapter 2 . 1/10/2011
OMH! She has my name! Grace! :D
Awww...she sounds like my Graci! but my Graci/sister is blonde...:D
| throughDeesEyes chapter 33 . 1/4/2011
Aww, this is a great chapter. I love how Lily said she'd date Rohan, and the ending of the chapter (the hole chapter) was great.
| WobblyJelly chapter 44 . 1/3/2011
*sobs* Such a BEAUTIFUL STORY! I - can't - believe - it - ended! *sobs*
yeah, I only realized that it ended today. STUPID OF ME, RIGHT? Great story, I loved it so much!
| Lilly Luna Potter chapter 44 . 1/2/2011
wow that was awesome. i really didn't want it ro end but i suppose all stories have to end. it was a really great ending and im gonna give you cyber cookies and hugs and whatever you want!