|Reviews for The Final Verses|
| Nalahime chapter 1 . 11/18/2014
I can just say that this is awesome! I always wondered what the rest of the song for those two could be (like Simon once did too :D). Nice thinking! Thanks for coming up with this!
| earfluffy chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
That was a nice addition to the poem. Although it should be "king Seoman", not "King Simon". You will find that it was what he was reffered to in the book.
| Aeronnen chapter 1 . 1/7/2007
That's great! It's really poweful, and it fits in with the rest of the poem brilliantly. It's actually one thing I wondered about when i'd finished green angel tower! well done!
| Kitty Invictus chapter 1 . 10/10/2006
1- i love your name it looks familure for some reason.
2- i probably shouldn't have read this before finishing "To Green Angel Tower. (I've only got about 280 pgs left) you should really put a spoiler warning on this. not like i didn't suspect the small bit of info it gave away, but think if i was just starting the "Memory, Sorrow and Thorn" Trilogy.
3-it was awesome (Good Job)
| StarFire and Sakura chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
Memory, Sorrow, and Thorn.
| Yang of Yin chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
Hey! That's pretty good! I really liked it, good job!
| swordoftruth chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
i don't know how you rhyme... i like it. sounds like a real ballad/ song /thing.
| ridiculouspants chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
Way to go! I love anyone who writes a MS&T fic. I loved it, especially the last stanza.
| fertig chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
E! *that's me squealing because I finally get what you're talking about* *and because I'm jealous 'cause I can never write stuff like that in school, which sucks*
Anyway, v. good! So Simon does become king! Where I am in the book, he's still wandering through the forest, hungry and half-crazed. But if things do get better . . .And I hope I come across this Jiriki character soon. Is he hot? See ya at school,
| Colonel Marksman chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
This was the ONLY way I could get a hold of you!
You have your private message turned off, and no e-mail display (BTW, the e-mail display is very smartly created. They show it in an unselectable, unhighlightable "picture", and is only viewable by members of
I've got plenty to say to you, but I can't say anything. I cannot contact you.
Ah, what the crap. While I'm here, I'll post a review.
Although I am a fan of Tad Williams' work, I'm not that familiar with some of his works, (I hear Simon is a very well developed character, however) but the poem seems to have that "Fantasy" hit to it, like a strange, old tune. It fits local color it seems. Something an Old Englishman would've written.
Nice rhythm and ryhme.
| tithefey chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
Cool! Hey, I finally have a book by Tad Williams! I don't think it's the series you're writing about, though. It has an African and stuff . . .And if you have the first book of the series you're writing about, please give it to me when your done! The library only has the second and third. I guess I should email or PM (personal message) you with these things, shouldn't I? Well, whatever.
THE SHADOW (Sorry, Fredbobjoesmith Jr. is acting up again. i think Prozac may be the answer . . . .)