Reviews for Coming Foward
Anonymous chapter 16 . 3/17/2013
SAVE THEM! Now defy laws again.
Anonymous chapter 11 . 3/17/2013
Ms Mows is next.
Anonymous chapter 7 . 3/17/2013
Aww.. You could've killed Daisy.
EPICYOSHI39000 chapter 12 . 2/13/2012
To marioman174:your wrong somepeople like miss mowz aka me cause shes uneke(check my other reaview down there)
EPICYOSHI39000 chapter 12 . 2/13/2012
Ok to tell you the truth i like miss mowz mosly cause she uneke(dont now how to spell it)shes the only mouse in paper mario ttyd who wich was taken out of super paper mario(allonge with koops and the other partners sadly)and she is only in paper mario ttyd and not in other mario games with the other partners and super paper mario only had dumb pixls instad of the uneke nintendo why ~EPICYOSHI NO ONE MORE EPIC THAN YOSHI
Yoshinaruto chapter 16 . 12/28/2010
The ending is similar to "The Final Destination" whare they all die in the end. I am sad Yoshi died. :( Wait, There are millions of Yoshis in the world... :)
Gloomily Cheerful chapter 13 . 12/19/2010
Great cliffhanger chapter! When I was reading this and I saw the adds, one of them was for elevator repair and I was just, "WTH?"

Ahem, yes, very good story
Gloomily Cheerful chapter 4 . 12/19/2010
Bobbery is falling down, falling down, falling down... Bobbery is falling down, he cut his eye with a razor... (To the tune of "London bridge") Muahahahaha! (In case you can't tell, I enjoy dark musical humor...)

Great story, though! I love all of your works.
dartz841 chapter 15 . 1/18/2009
Cheesy magazine bit :P Such a slaughterhouse the mall turned out to be
dartz841 chapter 16 . 1/18/2009
Brutal ending
dartz841 chapter 9 . 12/25/2008
You calculated the probability of Jolene's death ahppening :/
dartz841 chapter 7 . 12/25/2008
I've never really liked Yoshi, however I found it ironic that the first time around it was freezing water that brought about his end, and now its boiling water
dartz841 chapter 4 . 12/25/2008
The song was nicely fit in the death
dartz841 chapter 1 . 12/25/2008
uh-oh the call reeks of bringing in more trouble than it'll solve
Sarifina Filth chapter 16 . 8/22/2008
Well... poo, that Stinks! Death cant tell them their free to go then change it's mind. I shouldnt have read that las t chapter, oh well...
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