Reviews for Lucky Charm
Guest chapter 1 . 3/12
french?
Logan chapter 8 . 1/1/2014
That was amazing ‹3 There are errors here and there, but I hope you know just how amazingly this is written. It's gorgeous!
Bottan chapter 8 . 8/2/2010
Very nice story, though I certainly would have appreciated a bit more BL. ;) However, the story was fine and had a very calming effect on me. Thanks for writing, translating and sharing! :D

Btw. you seem to know a lot about Japanese culture, are you, by any chance, Japanese or have lived there for a time?
Bottan chapter 5 . 8/2/2010
Brilliant story. I liked the chapter quite a lot - hopefully Doumeki will come out alive - to me it seems right now like he traded his good luck for some of Watanuki's bad luck. The characters are really, really well done.
Bottan chapter 2 . 8/2/2010
That was adorable... *_* I love the way you write these two falling in love without ever going OOC... Beautiful work! :3
Bottan chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
Liked it very much. This is actually the first xxxholic ff I'm reading, so I can't really compare it to anything, but I really liked the way you're writing Doumeki. I never got that guy in the Manga for his dry and seemingly completely uncaring one-word-comments (though I liked him and found him fairly interesting). Only when following through what he's actually thinking in between Watanuki telling him rather upset of his tight finances and Doumeki remarking that he's hungry I start to understand what's going on with that guy. So, I liked this a lot and I'm going on to ch 2 now. x3
Ppleater chapter 5 . 12/14/2009
Right when I read "He could actually see her" 19 sai came on my itunes. Lol. It added to the effect.
jess.sree chapter 8 . 11/30/2009
that was a confusing story. couldn't really see any real plot to it. nothing really changed at the end.
jess.sree chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
...I wanna cry. You made Kimihiro's situation so damn hopeless. It's freaking sad...

Good job.
Foolish Mortal chapter 3 . 7/30/2009
I like the end of this chapter.

"I don't have anything else..."

"You can have mine." An automatic response. Not even knowing what Watanuki is talking about.

The eye, the blood. Doumeki is always giving.
valenciadarkness chapter 8 . 5/28/2009
Just got into the anime/mange and this pairing and you don't leave me disappointed! Read the story in one sitting. Very interesting plot! . Me like!
Jochamon chapter 8 . 4/9/2009
that was really great. Very wonderfully written.

kinda wish for more douwata, but...lol

anyway, very good! XD
Twelf Bell chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
not really understanding the plot but so far so good :D
Kiwee chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
Ahaha, now that I read this after I'm (semi) caught up on Holic, I actually catch all the references now. This was very nicely written, and it really captures the way Watanuki and Doumeki interact with each other and how the underlying emotions could play out. A mini-masterpiece-only if it was longer. xD

The ending was a bit unsatisfying, but hey, it's almost creepy how CLAMP-like it was, so I could totally see something like this happen in the manga.

The way Doumeki gave up something so dear-without realizing its value, no less-so easily for Watanuki was just utterly IC and so very fangirl squee-worthy. My inner child still wouldn't calm down.

Well, in closing, I really enjoyed reading this piece, and I hope to see more from you in the fandom in the future.
hadbeenworking chapter 8 . 11/25/2008
I find the style this story was written in very unique, and the amount of clear information in it very much in tune with the feel of the manga (people not liking the last chapter should get their heads examined).

I was a genuine delight to read, and I'll be looking out for more from you in this fandom, if inspiration hits.
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