Reviews for Cole and co
ChrisWar666 chapter 6 . 1/26
Well, I liked it. Some nice possibilities for Marcus' past, and an -excellent- ending in those last 2 letters. I believe one of the books gives more info on Marcus, but this makes a good alternative. There are a few more wrong words throughout the story, but nothing truly serious.
CW666 chapter 1 . 1/26
Hi, small problem right at the beginning, before I start really reading. If you quench something (e.g. fire) you put a stop to it. Maybe 'thirsted' is what you wanted? ;D
DsignG4 chapter 1 . 2/15/2006
Uh... Marcus has extremely green eyes... I've been face to face with them (sigh)...

No houses on Arrissia, the planet is a barren toxic radioactive high-gravity rock they mine for q40 and everyone in the colony lives on a dirty orbiting "inhabitants platform"...