Reviews for The Death Beyond
minorlycrazy chapter 3 . 12/21/2007
your story is amazing, the only problem i have with it are the many grammer errors suchs as when you used the word Scene and i could tell you ment to use the word Sense..

i hope you'll onday update and edit it cause ive fallen inlove with your story

lots o' love

Olaf74 chapter 5 . 9/18/2007
I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.
crystal yuy chapter 5 . 7/27/2007
Good story, keep going!

A little question: are you gona put Ed, Al and the rest of the military in your story or is it just the Seven Deadly sins ?

Hope you'll update soon
DaeSiggil chapter 5 . 4/6/2007
*grumbles* evil writers with their evil short chapters... anyways, great story! this is getting very mysterious and good! .
skimmie chapter 5 . 8/20/2006
Naniwoiutennen chapter 5 . 7/4/2006
PLEASE add more... I'm really enjoying this story. I can't wait for the next chapter.

"THE FORGOTTEN" -Kai aka Naniwoiutennen
Queen of the Nymphs chapter 5 . 6/13/2006

is this going where I think its going?
CrystalSnape chapter 4 . 4/30/2006
Keep it up
Tenshi Youkai no Yugure chapter 4 . 4/20/2006


WhiteTwitch chapter 4 . 4/16/2006
I like it... but can you please make it NOT hpss? Thanks!
nurielle chapter 4 . 3/21/2006
is harry going to loose his arm and leg and get automail for them? that would be cool. this is off to a pretty good start.
Iicyb1tchiI chapter 4 . 3/14/2006
please update soon i like this story so far
Kavfh chapter 4 . 3/14/2006
ohw! How fun! Please update soon!
Adnexus chapter 4 . 3/14/2006
Like it hope you update soon
Hermeticia Smythe chapter 1 . 3/13/2006
Mussels - a variety of shellfish

Muscles - tissue in the arms and legs

Please correct this word as the image provided by the wrong one is disturbing

Liz W
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