|Reviews for He Wasn't|
| Chichi Musa Lynn chapter 1 . 3/10
sad but i just can't help to like the story
| jblockk chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
wow, well done.
| Darkangel000 chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
This is really good...It was sad but touching in a way i guess lol
Great job, keep up the good work! XD
| K.R. Cantanzaro chapter 1 . 10/6/2006
That had to be the most confusing thing I've ever really didn't make any sense!
| okusama chapter 1 . 3/28/2006
A most poignant and powerful fic indeed...u managed to reflect Chichi's feelings in a dramatic but direct conclusion. Love it! One of the best portrayals of their relationship I have ever read.
| maz2 chapter 1 . 2/5/2006
It's beautiful, the choise of words you made, the way the story is fit together.
I love it. Promise me you never stop writing, you hear me! No matter if you'll stop writing fanfiction in this universe: just continue writing something, anything. I could tell you felt good after you wrote this. And you may- you honestly did a great job!
| lizbennett chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
i think this is one of the best stories you've written. it's honest, it's touching, it's so beautifully descriptive so you can really sense and understand what Chi Chi is going through, and i love it. the end. : )
| tini jingli chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
well,let me thank you for the first deep and thoughtful fic here for quite some way of solving and you've got it quite fitting to the that you got it finally down,but a shame you won't write more...thanks!