|Reviews for The Sacrifice|
| Corvys Kasai chapter 1 . 5/18
Ooo this is nice. xD Anyone else here from the website?
| ladybug114 chapter 4 . 3/9/2013
oh no, this BETTER NOT be over! please tell me you didn't give up on this! its awesome, and I want more NOW! PLEEEAAAASE!
| Ppleater chapter 4 . 8/15/2008
Awh, it ends here? But it's pretty good so far!
| AirGirl Phantom chapter 4 . 6/22/2007
This is an awesome story! Please please update soon! It's exciting, and I can almost see it happening except for the blood (cuz, you know, it's Nick...) Awesome job!
| InhIkka chapter 4 . 8/22/2006
oh I hope you'll update soon! It's well written!
pleaz pleaz tell me the update is on her way!
| Pensulliwen chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
You have to continue this soon! It's so good, I can't wait to see what happens next!
| guy too lazy to log in chapter 4 . 4/21/2006
I love it! Just one thing... You should have made it the Blue Demon! Well, it was your dream... But you could have changed it! the blue demon makes a way better story! But your way is good too. It's great anyway! Loved it!
| Erniesaurus chapter 4 . 4/20/2006
- "so it shattered." Tidbit: This would probably be worded better as "making it shatter" or something along those lines. Maybe it's just me, but putting "so _" makes it sound like a conversation and not as formal, and it makes me stumble while reading.
- "I didn’t save you for no reason," Eugh, double negative. Again, probably worded better as "I saved you for a reason".
- "The two where" Typo: *were
- "scar-faced demon?" The "s" should be capitalized, yes?
- Erm, your scene dividers aren't showing up. .
- "a long" 'Nother typo: *along
Have I told you this is brilliant? I love this fic. Everyone is very well in character, the plot makes sense, and Zuko's schemes are perfect. The priest fit in well with the Avatarverse. :3
| GlitterDemon chapter 4 . 4/19/2006
excellent story! Writing fanfic that reads like episodes is one of my favorite things to do, and you've pulled it of nicely. You've really mastered the character's personalities and the dialogue fits them and flows smoothly. The pacing of the story is also very smooth with lots of good description. There was one grammatical error that kept popping up-places where you used "to" instead of "too", but those are small and easy to fix.
The plot really drew me in, I hope you finish soon!
Some things of interets that I noted: the green facepaint of the priest reminds me of the Celtic god the Green Man. How did you come up with the name Tane? It's interesting, but further research might produce a name that ties into the Chinese-based mythology in the show. Also, did you know Momo is Japanese for peach?
| Etoile Skies chapter 3 . 2/7/2006
Nice story. Very nice since Sokka, Katara, and Aang are all in character. Interesting dream, which made for an interesting plot. Keep up the good work!
Just curious, is the fic set before or after "The Waterbending Scroll"?
| Limetastic chapter 3 . 2/5/2006
Hi Reggie! Sorry it took me so long to find your fic! ;;
Ernie shall now review! D
All I really have to criticize is the typos. Mayhaps you could get someone *coughhinthintcoughmecough* to be a beta reader? :D
You kept everyone in character, the plot was engaging, and overall well thought-out. :3
| beanrox chapter 3 . 2/4/2006
Zuko saved Sokka...am I reading that right? Seriously, it's a great story, though. Update soon please!
| SovereignxXxBrunette chapter 3 . 2/4/2006
WHOA! MY GOD MY GOD! YOU HAVE THE MOST AWSOME DREAMS! I HAD NO IDEA THAT THAT WAS GOING TO HAPPEN! YOU *::HAVE::* TO UPDATE! PLEASE, SO I CAN SLEEP PEACEFULLY?
| Neko-chan chapter 3 . 2/4/2006
Yay! Suspense! _
| Wa-endi-chan chapter 2 . 2/4/2006
I LOVE your story. Keep going ! I'm dying of anticipation to know what happens next. Please keep going! :)