Reviews for On Axis
riverrat chapter 4 . 4/30/2013
This is an excellent story. I really feel for Severus with his miserable and lonely life. He never really had a chance with the marauders always making him the laughing stock. And from what we know from the books, his life before Hogwarts wasn't any better. He never had a good role model and it is no wonder that he got mixed up with the Death Eaters. He saw it as a way to finally get SOME respect. It really is a miracle that he found his way back to the light.
It looks as in your story he is using the pensieve to relive the parts with Lily because he still loves her and can't let go of her. So much grief, heartache and regret...
openwindow4 chapter 4 . 8/24/2007
i LOVED this! it totally gave a more in depth explanation on severus's actions, unlike rowling's weak chapter in DH. the indeed, the introspective shows the trials and tribulations that snape went through, and the reasonings for his actions and mistakes.

faved!
trobairiz chapter 4 . 8/4/2007
Heartbreaking.

Excellent story, really well written.
Jaelyss chapter 4 . 6/25/2007
A underrated fic. It's quite well written. I came for the Snape/Lily, and I'm even more pleased you have adult Snape POV before, during, and after Godric's Hollow. That's not as easy to find. Also, thank you for making Snape not schmoopy. ;)
Belated Epiphany chapter 4 . 7/2/2006
Just wanted to say that this was a fabulous fic. Loved how you portrayed Snape and his motives and everything. I was just about in tears at the end; those flashback-ish things always get me going. Anyways, good job!
PotionPolice chapter 4 . 4/6/2006
Hmm... Sorry I'm late to review the end of this fic.

I like it - a lot. Especially Snape's attitude towards his brief popularity in the 3rd chapter. I have similiar ideas concerning Lily and Snape at Godrics Hollow!

Congratulations on an excellent story!

I wonder if I could request a story that focuses JUST on Snape during his fifth year? Maybe the week after his worst memory? LOL!
Celeb'ronyo chapter 4 . 4/4/2006
I loved it...
bonnythebunny chapter 4 . 3/9/2006
i loved this story! it's so well written! lots of detail, and stuff, and it was so sad. it actually put me in an all angsty mood, like when you watcha movie and the ending's really sad. you could really feel what snape was feeling. you really are a great writer! i wish you luck on the other you write!
MySite chapter 3 . 3/8/2006
Hope ya update asap!
hpfan99 chapter 3 . 3/8/2006
snape is evil...that's all i gotta say...lol.

please update soon...
bonnythebunny chapter 3 . 3/8/2006
ooh! i like this story, it's very well written. i'm not much of a snapeshipper, but i do know that it is kinda james fault he turned out to be evil. you know, i never get it, in fanfics they put james really smart and all that, lily as naive and obnoxious, and snape all evil and all mean to lily. i actually believe he felt attracted to her, and he hates harry because lily had a baby with james. and not to mention harry is the equal image of james, too.
Celeb'ronyo chapter 1 . 3/7/2006
Sorry about not leaving a better review before...

I had to log off the computer so I printed it and ran...basically...

I really like this...and want more...so get on it... _
Celeb'ronyo chapter 2 . 3/6/2006
will email u a better review later...
Possum132 chapter 3 . 3/4/2006
I enjoyed Chapters and 2 - it makes sense that Sirius and James picked on Snape so viciously because Lily had shown some friendliness towards him. I have difficult squaring Chapter 3 with Dumbledore's statement in GoF that Snape turned spy before the fall of Voldemort.
MySite chapter 2 . 2/15/2006
I added this story to my favorite story list. hope update asap!
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