|Reviews for Give A Little|
| Delete-account-please-7751512 chapter 1 . 4/18/2016
Nice this was good.
| ForestGuardian311 chapter 1 . 6/6/2014
This is so beautiful, I really almost have tears in my eyes. You portrayed this so beautifully...
Everything about this was so wonderfully written...
And the Professor's quote...Ugh. T_T Brilliant.
| musicalgirl4474 chapter 1 . 11/15/2013
That is so sweet! Not Peter being sick, but the reactions of his siblings!
| Life's a dream chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
Aww that was so sweet in the end. Loved it!
| Swiftlet in the Cloud chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
It's so sweet and deep that I'm literally in tears by the end of it. And when I said, literally, i meant it. Absolute love it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
| PenAndInkPrincess chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
Aw! Yup. I can see Peter risking his own health and well-being for a cricket ball.
| Bella chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
Wow, I loved that so much!
| phoenixqueen chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
Huh. I've read this one several times, and I thought that I had reviewed it, but I never did. Bad me! So, to remedy that situation...
This is an amazing story, Shannon. I am completely mind-boggled by it. The caring and love between Edmund and Peter - you nail it every single bloody time. I wish I could write the two of them half as well as you do. My major Narnia story, Between Families is no where near as good at portraying their relationship as you manage with every story!
I love the idea of Peter having asthma. I don't know why, I suppose its all of that hurt/comfort stuff that we writers love. It is such a simple idea, and ironically enough, it provides so much fodder for angst that it's unbelievable. I mean, there's only so many ways that you can injure someone to the point of death without it actually *killing* them, but a chronic illness is something that doesn't actually get used very often.
I love Edmund's worry, and his mothering behavior. I know that you briefly touched on the story about Peter diving into the river and getting sick as a result, but I would love to see a story that expands on that - just how sick *did* Peter get? What did the Narnians think? Do they have anything remotely resembling asthma in Narnia? I wouldn't think so, which would mean someone like Oreius, or Tumnus would have to be panicking, wondering what could possibly be wrong with the High King, especially after he passes out. Please, please, please...if you need some sort of brain storm for a one-shot that is the story that I would love to see more than any other, because I know you'll put your amazing touch on it, just like you do on everything else that you write!
Write on my friend!
| Kelcor chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
I SO didn't want this one to end! Great job! :o)
| LadyoftheShield chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
If Helen knew the torture heput himself through . . .
Stop being so brilliant I don't know what to say.
| whydontyouletmedelete chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
oy... Ed is such a great brother! well, of course, Peter ,too. )
I love the "leaning post"- and the sleeping-part! well, I adore everything
this was such a heartwarming story *sigh* it feels like a hot chocolate and a blanket on a stormy (and rainy D ) day ...
go on writing like this, and u will someday own the world- or, at least, the Pevensie brothers- ur storys are so much better than C. .
With a reverent obeisance,
| Receneck chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
Aw that was so sweet
| firewhiz chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
omg, great story! Peter's sick and the others are taking care of him. love the sibling bonding :)
| Artemis1000 chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
Such a lovely story, I adore the sibling interaction here.