Reviews for Play Dead
Jack Rogan chapter 1 . 1/14/2015
finally a JillxNemesis fic. i loved every word
RussRock7283 chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
I have a Boner now...
Ivory Tears chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
Really great one shot. It was very well written. :)
Meesiera chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
wow O.O very explicit
King of Werewolves chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
Wow, I don't get to read a JillxNemesis story every day, and when i do its pretty good. I'm glad your a fan too. Please write another story like this.
Shessysmistress chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
HOLY SHIT WRITE was the best im going to go find my BF now so we can try some any way write more

kiri
The 8th Square chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
I had no idea that Nemesis was so eloquent. :)

Again, another beautifully written erotic story, that at the same time is more than just an erotic story. The only complaint I have about this is grammer. When Nemesis refers to Jill you accadentally put 'her' instead of 'you' at times, and you tend to switch from past tense to present a lot. I suggest you proof read you story over and make it more consistant. Other than that the story as a whole was good. :)