Reviews for Lies and Deceit |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Haha that is a neat trick! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Anko is such a badass in fanfiction! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Always glad to see an update to a good story like this. I am also glad that Naruto has not completly rolled over yet and told everyone everything that he has been doing. It's far to common in Naruto Fanfiction, and to some degree canon, for people to share all their secret techniques and special moves. I can't count the number of times Naruto developed something useful in fanfiction, only to have everyone turn on him instantly and demand that he tell him how he did it. The reason's are pretty much always the same, tell them for Village security, Team Unity, and so that a Teacher 'can really know what they can do'. Never mind the fact no one else but Naruto seems to have share everything. Are there not entire clans with secret techniques? Sure some of them are bloodline based, but not all of them seem to be. Yet they are allowed their secrets, yet Naruto is a 'dangerous element' and 'being influnced by the Kyuubi' if he doesn't blab everything he is doing to Kakashi, Sasuke, the Hokage etc. It's nice to see a Naruto who doesn't spill his beans at the first chance he got for a change. Sure it happens, but usually only in Dark fics where Naruto is out to kill everyone. |
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![]() ![]() Just rereading this great story, since I already reviewed this chapter I posted this anon. If author wants to respond feel free send a PM to Vilkath. I always did think the lack of any other users of the Sharingan was a bit odd. I mean come on even with Danzo eventually being revealed to have a few dozen of the things implanted in his arm for some super powerful reality bending powers (that don't drain to much chakra or kill the user like most the Magenkyo powers do), there should of been dozens or more eyes left over. Given the over all weakness of Kohona at the time after both the Kyuubi attack and the slaughtering of the Uchia's themselves you would think the village, and even Danzo would all be for making copies of Kakashi. Not even Danzo's root minions have any copies the eyes, none were snuck out to Orchimaru or other villages despite the huge gap in security Kohona seems to have. Just about anyone can come and go from the village as they please, yet that night no body parts or tissue samples got out. Only thing makes any sense really is Madra, or Itachi himself went out of their way to roast, smash and crush every useful bit of Uchia body left behind durring the attack. Not a single eye, sperm or egg survived the attack intact. Heck fact that the Uchia as a whole were so weak and there are not dozens of missing ninja, Uchia breeding programs or the like in the world always amazed me. The Hyuuga have to have that caged bird seal to protect their bloodline, yet the Uchia had nothing and were fine. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Loving the story so far! :D Can't wait for more! :) Best of luck! Peaches. |
![]() ![]() XDXD Ass-sitting no Jutsu! Holy crap thats funny! |
![]() ![]() ![]() umm qeustionwhy isit tha sakuras last nam ie hiruna its sposed to be haruno |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just found this story and have enjoyed it immensely. I'm looking forward to seeing more of Naruto's training and how the finals play out. Hope to see something soon, Happy Writing! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have to admit, you're writing can be confusing to track, trying to parse out what scene is which. I think that it's the layout and structure of your paragraphs. Despite all of that, your story is very entertaining. Your characters are just as wacky and strange as us real-life humans. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Outstanding story you have made here. I realy like how you have it going as it has made the storys so I could not put it down. I can not wait till you post up the next chapter of this story. One thing I do think you need to include is what Anko though about him taking the torcher as even though it was just a clone it was able to take the whole thing from her without giving her anything of use. |