Reviews for Lies and Deceit
gabelou1991 chapter 14 . 8/18/2018
J'aime bien ce genre d'histoire.

Premièrement ce n'est pas un UA car il n'y rien sur le passé de radicalement changé.

Le titre de la fic est génial car ce sont deux éléments d'un ninja.
Arsenal chapter 14 . 7/29/2018
I'm only glad you stopped here. I couldn't take everything that has to do with Anko anymore. I skipped the whole thing.
Arsenal chapter 7 . 7/29/2018
I dislike this chapter. Where is the bashing? Naruto is in the right here. And he did not overreact at all.
Arsenal chapter 3 . 7/29/2018
I came here for the bashing. I'm still waiting
Guest chapter 10 . 6/29/2018
"He had to know more"? HOW? There isn't a lot more TOO know! He's insane, a jinchruiki of the WEAKEST bijuu and KILLS AT THE DROP OF A HAT! Nothing else to really say! Orochi, snake sannin, washed out of sage training, everyone makes him out to be a LOT more powerful then he is, a GIANT COWARD.. There everything about everyone! He wants anymore then THAT then he needs reminded that LIFE doesn't come with an instruction manual. (ALSO garaa is from THE DESERT so take a GUESS at to what he uses to kill?)
Guest chapter 9 . 6/29/2018
and as for what orochimaru wants from assgay? Well that's kinda OBVIOUS too isn't it? He's only got ONE REDEEMING FEATURE! His eyes are THE ONLY thing important about him (the only thing that ANYONE else could POSSIBLY WANT!) His personality SUCKS, he's NOT smart enough to KNOW anything worth anything, he's really pretty weak, and his clan is DEAD, so really his eyes are IT, there would be NO OTHER REASON to go after him (he's UTTERLY FORGETTABLE) So see? It's just a simple deduction.
Guest chapter 9 . 6/29/2018
Just give naruto ALL the books on sealing from the jump, he's an uzumaki, it's IN HIS BLOOD, seems completely POINTLESS not too. Besides even if he blows himself up, he'll regenerate. "there was nothing out of the ordinary going on"? Oh yeah except the insane jinchuriki, orochimaru being there AND a group of NOT-gennin being in the exams! Yup NOT anything strange going on. IF jiriya is a seal-master then he KNOWS A LOT BETTER then to call naruto "demon", not only that but kushina and minato WOULD HATE HIS GUTS!
Guest chapter 8 . 6/29/2018
As stated befpre. labuto basically blows his cover to pieces, there is NO WAY a genin could have that info, ESPECIALLY on people NOT FROM THE VILLAGE... Also why would he have mission reports from the other leaves? It makes NO SENSE.. Yeah it's HIS seventh time taking it, BUT NONE OF THEM HAVE BEEN IN IT EVEN ONCE. So there would be NO WAY he POSSIBLY COULD have learned the info. And as far as ibiki? The HOKAGE might be able to demote or suspend nins but NOT the council. They are purely advisories, So they can really DO NOTHING. and I find it VERY dumb to think he could say "you will never be promoted"... The other kages aren't going to give a FLYING FIG about what he says or their pathetic little test says, they will promote WHOMEVER they want! SO ALL IN ALL, all his bluster is really kinda TRANSPARENT (I thought that, the SECOND I saw this episode in canon)(along with the sheer IDIOCY of kabuto and orochimaru. and how these people can't POSSIBLY be geniuses as is said)
Guest chapter 7 . 6/29/2018
I don't see the big deal to the chunnin exams,for the most part they are a waste of time, NOBODY from this team is getting promoted (least of all the dip-stick uchiha) and kakashi is STILL missing the point, he's still NOT TRAINING THEM! Teamwork is all well and good but THIS team IS NEVER GOING TO HAVE IT, they will NEVER be friends or allies, so just GIVE IT UP and move on! It's really "whipping a dead horse". Naruto FOR ONCE has EVERY SINGLE REASON to act like he does, he won't be the PUNCHING BAG for the team, and they are FALLING APART BECAUSE OF IT, that SHOULD let the idiot know he has GOT to work on sakura and sasuke more, NOT the entire team and NOT naruto, NO this about the OTHER TWO crap-tastic students.

He doesn't get why his chakra changes when he gets mad? Even though he's now HEARD he has DEMONIC chakra going into him ALL the time? Isn't this simpl arithmetic? Not REALLY ALL THAT TOUGH TO FIGURE OUT.

So the "transform" didn't give naruto a CLUE? Has he ALREADY forgotten his OWN semi-transformation in wave? "So this is where it all begins", not really much of a beginning, it was OVER in under a hour and the sand and sound got summarily SPANKED! So awful "grandiose" words for what amounts to a SUCKER PUNCH and then getting their heads handed to them!"aside from the hokage there is no leaf that can hurt garaa"? Has baki FORGOTTEN jiryiya? and the fact the leaf WOULD HAVE THEIR OWN jinchuriki? (which considering the leaf is the one that gave them OUT back in the day, would stand to reason that theirs would be the MOST POWERFUL of all of them!) FRIGHTENING how stupid the characters can be in this series. (and before you say that "the perv is supposed to be out of the village".. Um HE WOULD MOST CERTAINLY COME BACK FOR THE EXAMS IN HIS OWN VILLAGE...DUUUUH that's BLATANTLY obvious)
Guest chapter 6 . 6/28/2018
Actually paranoia sounds like a VERY GOOD thing for ninja to have! And as far as "conclusive evidence" they REALLY need to stop worrying about that, I mean seriously ALL ninja never leave ANY evidence, the fact that there is NONE would be evidence enough! Kabuto and orochimaru BOTH basically blow their cover all to heck in the first day of the exam, but NOBODY NOTICES (I mean seriously, the only way they could BLOW IT further is by holding a NEON SIGN saying "orochimaru and SPY here" with a flashing arrow pointing at them!)Well with your comment about the henge keeping the weight of the person, well canon kinda shoots that in the foot (sasuke TOSSED naruto in wave after he turned into a shuriken) sasuke is NOT that strong. So it looks like weight DOES change in a henge.
asighoaighnqllg chapter 1 . 5/12/2018
Ichira? wtf? And according to you, this happens after the Wave mission. So, Naruto already knows about his status as the village Jinchurikki. That itself makes half of the first chapter obsolete. He pranks people and disrupts the daily life of countless strangers. No wonder he is hated. This excluding the Kyuubi-haters and all.
NaaMaloom chapter 1 . 3/26/2018
Waste of time
Guest chapter 1 . 3/25/2018
Ichi? Ichira? What the fuck?
Guest chapter 3 . 3/20/2018
I like that he's training seriously but copying sasuke is kinda weird and not unique
SakuraKoi chapter 14 . 11/16/2017
wow so good. have the finals get switched up just to mess with the genning
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