Reviews for Lies and Deceit |
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![]() ![]() ![]() For a first chapter this was awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() too bad this looks dead, it's quite interesting |
![]() ![]() "Sorry peepz, but don't worry, I'm still planning on finishing Lies and Deceit." Liar. R.I.P. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I juat finished reading this story and thought it was excellent. I can see you haven't updated in a few years so i hope this review will motivate you to pick up writing again |
![]() ![]() ![]() Neat sceen at the next end with Kakashi and Orochimaru. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Weird choice giving them a hour to prepare, for the second stage. They didn't get that consideration in cannon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thats the common misconception. Lee can use his chakra he just can't externalize it into Jutsu. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto's clones should have blown the cabin and Anko sky high. Maybe not enough to kill her but enough to hospitalize her for a week to a month. The Hokagi and Yamanaka would love to see proof of her performing unsanctioned interrogations after viewing Naruto's memories. Naruto can even go, 'Oops, I thought she was another clone' if he wanted to. I sure wouldn't let her get away with torture. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's a pity this was never finished... |
![]() ![]() ![]() this fic is really cool. i really can't figure out what direction your endgame is going in, so it's fun. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! (_) |
![]() ![]() ![]() pls write more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad to see you avoided most of the cliches made by the authors of bashing!fics and fix-it!fics. It's a shame the story wasn't updated for years. |
![]() ![]() Why does Hinata like Nardo? He never paid her any attention. |
![]() ![]() Okay I know that it's been like four years since this was updated but I need to get this off my chest. Whenever I read a fic like this with the Chuunin Exams and they mention Kabuto and his nin-info cards, no one seems to have taken the very obvious chance to call them 'ninfo' cards, although now that I see it written down, it's even more stupid than I imagined. Anyway, this fic is really good and if you do see this after all this time: good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() An enjoyable read... I'd like to see what happens but if it doesn't come to fruition, I'm grateful for what I've read. I especially like how You wrote Naruto's character and the spin you partook in for his favourite jutsu. |