| Reviews for Lies and Deceit |
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   waterdemon9 chapter 14 . 12/31/2015 I absolutely love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter to come out! |
| superboy77 chapter 8 . 12/7/2015 cool |
| apeljohn chapter 14 . 10/17/2015 This fic is a diamond in the rough. It manages to be a bashing!fic without our hero descending into wangst, a fix!fic without him ascending into Godhood, and a good laugh without turning into crack. I think I've read it three or four times now, and it is still a fun and interesting read. Hope it continues someday. |
| samuelvan.heuger chapter 14 . 9/4/2015 me want more. . . :D |
| Foxy Engineer chapter 14 . 8/11/2015 I want more please |
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/5/2015 Imbecile |
| cloystreng chapter 14 . 8/2/2015 I've been enjoying this story so far. Looked and saw the last update was 2012...sad day. |
| Guest chapter 14 . 4/18/2015 Learn basic grammar and how to leave a line between paragraphs not every third or so as you prefer. Your writing makes my head hurt just looking at it. |
| Dracoessa chapter 2 . 8/25/2014 Take that you duckassed head emo. |
| Nerfhearder69 chapter 14 . 6/24/2014 Looks like a great story! Are yah gonna continue it, or are you just gonna nibble on the barrel... |
| elicomal chapter 2 . 6/2/2014 umm wait im confused, naruto hates sasuke for having the sharingan yet he copies/ mimics him... im confused? he wants to beat sasuke yet he emulates him. its as if naruto's the antagonsit here- the bitter one. i assume naruto's attribute here is fire since well he's trainign fire in jsut a day without trouble (impossible feat iwhtout shadow clone help and also if he is wind type). dude clarify this |
| CosmicEssence chapter 14 . 4/27/2014 there's a tone to this one that I love, and while its not 'laugh out loud' funny it is pretty amusing in parts. Loving the whole idea that Naruto started this so he could be 'more like sasuke' and better than too only I think now he's realising he doesn't need him. great how you had him stand up to Sakura and got kinda bloodthirsty at times regarding his team mates, Kakashi's unknowing of what to do with his team, with whats happening with Naruto and just some of those reactions. (That whole scene where Sakura says she wishes death on Naruto, Naruto's response and Kakashi's interference has to be one of my favs for this) Also the popularity with sensei's right now, his fight with Kiba, and the little insights into other's schedules are excellent too. the extreme use of the 3 basics and training with Kage Bunshins are really well portrayed. Question, he destroyed tht snake with some version of the Rasen Shuriken right? Anyway I just really like and enjoy what you've done here _* |
| MYK-ON chapter 14 . 4/12/2014 love it! |
| Sorasdream chapter 1 . 3/31/2014 Sounds interesting so far! |
| Eraser-Mist chapter 14 . 3/25/2014 interesting story |