Reviews for Return Of The Elemental
Guest chapter 5 . 5/12
Good
Nick Treadsliver chapter 11 . 3/30
While the story itself is somewhat decent, the your/you're and their/they'rethere grammatical mistakes are frustrating to read.
project dark lordess chapter 1 . 11/2/2017
merlin!
observentuser chapter 32 . 9/2/2017
Awesome!
Docholiday024 chapter 9 . 5/22/2017
Are you kidding me you write the story so that Sirius Black is free and then you have him make the exact same mistake that he made when Lily and James were killed only this time instead of going to prison you kill him and in when Harry meets Merlin again all you asked about is Hermione you're joking right
vmcclure2 chapter 32 . 4/2/2017
Hmm, this chapter should have been called "THE WEDDING OF THE CENTURY AND AFTER" Oh well, good showing!
vmcclure2 chapter 7 . 3/6/2017
Good flowing story! However, somebody keeps using 'there' wherever there should be 'their'. Ron is awfully thick isn't he? But then it takes Dumbledore to dropping simple statements to get Hermione to begin thinking maybe Harry does have feelings for her
vmcclure2 chapter 4 . 2/24/2017
U might want to do a word search for all 'forewords' and replace them with 'forward'. The 1st is the short commentary in the beginning of a book, the 2nd is for when a person or animal or thing moves forward in someway. Great storytelling! Quite a funny one too!
8465338DeleteAccount chapter 32 . 11/29/2016
Nice story I enjoy reading it.
FierceDeityLinkMask chapter 32 . 12/27/2015
Nikki? Why?
Kbro chapter 8 . 8/1/2015
Cool dude
huh chapter 8 . 4/6/2015
Harry has lots of power and resources yet makes a bunch of stupid decisions, especially in fights. Normally to endear people to your main character you'd do the reverse, giving him little to work with, having to rely on ingenuity to pull through.
Guest chapter 12 . 4/1/2015
Way too much Lovey Dovey. Till Harry came back too Hogwarts and before he and Hermoine came together iit was good to very good. But now it's way too much Harry-Hermoine scenes. Sorry, nothing for me.
RUBIUS55 chapter 32 . 2/19/2015
IT WAS AMAZING! Thank you for this story!
Jason M chapter 7 . 9/23/2014
I WANT TO BE HARRY IF HE GETS HERMIONE SHE IS SO FUCKING HOT
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