i really like it

:)

A very lovely story! I hope there's a sequel! You should change the story to "completed" though... )

One of my favourite fics, I absolutely loved your story, I hope the sequal is as good if not better than this one

Hi,

You crafted a great story. It would be an outstanding story if you would go back and edit out the typos. It is good enough to warrant a final read through. It helps me to start at the back of a chapter and read a paragraph at a time. That way, I don't get caught up in the story and can focus on the small details - your/you're, their/there by example.

You really did write a good story.

Thanks for sharing it.

Old-Crow

I enjoyed reading your story. I'm going to put it in my favorites so I can find it again because I'm sure I'll want to read again sometime.

Thanks for writing and sharing it with us.

aw its perfect.

HEy, thanks for a fun read, nicely done! FFN was being a bit cranky in displaying all the chapters, but with a bit of patience I was able to read it all. Good stuff! Hope to see more of your work.

HEY! The Princess Bride LIVES! u do know the whole : "will u give me mone/information, etc" bit is when the swordsman (i cant spell his name) does his "u killed my father, prepare to die" bit right? an u will give credit?

anyway, just thought id say how glad i was to see the princess bride recognised.

Absolutely loved this story. You have a gift in writing. Thanks for writing this for all of us.

WOW! AMAZING, SURPERB! I can't tell you how amazing your story is! Keep up the amazing writing, and I hope I see a sequel out relatively soon! update sooN!

Sarah

That has to be the cheesiest thing I've ever read! The whole eyes are the window to the soul thing actually made me cringe. The story so far isn't too bad though... It's extreme averageness at its best.

Take that as you will.

great story. can't wait for the sequel! email me if/when you get it going.

is this story finished if not are you going to finish it?

lol good thing 'moine didnt hear that last sentence..i wouldn't want to be harry...

hahahaha lol solus is going to have to wait 456 years...but cant he be sent back to the elemental world for 456 months? but then again he seems to be so cute...