I love this story

stupid. Dumbledore sees harry a a grandson? yeah right. Figg has to tell Albus about harry... where are his gizmo's? Albus writing a howler? omg just no.
Dropped 3 chapters in

This is a great story, thank you so much for sharing it with all of us.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww! this is the sweetest story I have ever read!

waiiiiiiiit, what happened to the other guardians?

The death of Lockyer had me crying, literally! Ohhhhhhhhhhh, why did u have to make Locky diiiiiiiiiie?

The story is very good and enjoyed it, but non the less there are errors and mistakes. And of course plain stupid decisions or actions taken by people.
-No way harry would send hedwig to hermione without even a letter, or in all that time not contacting anyone. He comes back to a new house and can open that door? besides not seeing a new house.. merlin or otherwise done it delibratly asshole knowing what was going on.
-Hermione is smart just desmiss a dream, or forgetting harry completly? what a dear friend?
-Ron and Hermione dating? Without harry inbetween they wouldn’t last as friends.
-Doubt very much that harry didn't knew about the stairs to the girls first year were told that, and why is Hermione not in her head girl dorm?
-What what! Seriously no bloody way harry kisses another girl just to help, dumbnuts didn’t even think about Hermione, or that wood maybe break up with the girl
-Yeah very logic not even thinking the portkey of voldy is trap, and going without support even my god. And take on a fight they couldn't win at hogwarts besides that again such logic.. harry is facing voldy but just up and help somebody else as if you not hurt yourself or your love's head is not about the blow up.
-Draco shouldn't even last this long stupid..

love the story so far but eventhough I'm dyslexic I have problem reading through this you might need a beta or somebody to help you with errors and so on.

any way I think you have done a fantastic job so far and I'll continue read this amazing story I hope you continue this and hopefully get help with erros and so on with a beta cuss it's amazing story with big potential god luck with this amazing work and other work in the future

How fucking dare you

Stupid ass story... Was this written for 8 year old kids

Great Story

Nice use of the lines from The Princess Bride!

At least the story was interesting. It felt like you wrote the whole story through voice dictation and never once proof read it or beta reviewed. There were so many grammatical errors.

Good

While the story itself is somewhat decent, the your/you're and their/they'rethere grammatical mistakes are frustrating to read.