Reviews for The Chasm Between
RevelwithAbigailE chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
Lovely. Beautifully written. Really captures Edward's inner struggle. Please keep writing. I love it!
Forever and everxxx chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
Wow... I'm blown away by the quality if writing... You are a spectacular author! If I had taken the time to imagine that night, in all it's difficultly in Edward POV, I think this kind of this would be what I would want to write, but not beable to form the sentences because of an unknown force. I may not be that good a writer myself, however I can resognise pure talent in others. This being one example. You are absolutely incredible. Wow
dear.cherie chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
This is creepily good! I like.
Demiglitch chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
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Loiko chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
Hello, Alphie,

I've just read your story, and it has made a great impression on me. You have managed to catch Edward's personality so well - that's amasing! The thing is, that now I would really like to get your permission to translate it into Russian and share your marvellous story with russian twilight-lovers on our fansite " ", of course, with observing all the rights. I would really appreciate to get an answer from you. Thanks in advance.
The Antimatter chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
Really trying not to flame, but... this is kind of creepy. Would you like your creepy classmate sneaking into your room at night and watching you sleep? Apply this possibility to real life before you write something like this, please, because Edward watching Bella sleep is in no way romantic- it's just plain creepy.
ForgetfulForever chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
You captured Edward's personality perfectly...something I've never managed to do :)

Very nice
Edward-Jacob4ever01 chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
I LIKE THIS STORY! ITS VERY NICE I HOPE YOU CAN MAKE A STORY THAT IS BASED ON THIS STORY AND MAKE VERY LONG AND WONDERFUL JUST LOIKE THIS ONE! PLS CONTINUE! BIG FAN!
Sky-Angel14 chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
Aw...
UnfortunatelyAddicted chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
Wow! It's like you know our complicated little man personally - that fic portrays him perfectly almost it was excellannt
Denise Black chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
I love it!
MoxyGirl chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
Intersting. I like anything in EPOV because SM left him such a mystery. I like this short one-shot.

Ashley,

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BiteMe35 chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
Aw...

How sweet...
Angela.Weber.in.Forks chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
beautifully written...I love the clear distinction between light and dark, adn also those gray areas too!

keep up the good work!

MJ
pbwitbeck chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
I LOVE THIS! Great one shot!
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