Reviews for The Chasm Between
Hatter's Madness chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
Wow. I cried a little bit! This is fantastic. Thank you for writing it! :D
EveryDayOfForever chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
Hi there! We featured your story along with a review on our site, everydayofforever. com (without the space). Our site is committed to finding and promoting the best in canon Twilight fanfiction, and we've selected your fic for a feature! We hope to be seeing more from you in the future. Love, Shelley & Meredith
Jessie07 chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
sweet story!
runemagic chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
love it!
Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
Liked that a lot. Quick and insightful look into Edward's mind when he's trying to decide the path he should take. This moment he took the right one.
Meghana Leafy chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
awwwww cute!
RevelwithAbigailE chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
Lovely. Beautifully written. Really captures Edward's inner struggle. Please keep writing. I love it!
Forever and everxxx chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
Wow... I'm blown away by the quality if writing... You are a spectacular author! If I had taken the time to imagine that night, in all it's difficultly in Edward POV, I think this kind of this would be what I would want to write, but not beable to form the sentences because of an unknown force. I may not be that good a writer myself, however I can resognise pure talent in others. This being one example. You are absolutely incredible. Wow
dear.cherie chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
This is creepily good! I like.
Demiglitch chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
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Loiko chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
Hello, Alphie,

I've just read your story, and it has made a great impression on me. You have managed to catch Edward's personality so well - that's amasing! The thing is, that now I would really like to get your permission to translate it into Russian and share your marvellous story with russian twilight-lovers on our fansite " ", of course, with observing all the rights. I would really appreciate to get an answer from you. Thanks in advance.
The Antimatter chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
Really trying not to flame, but... this is kind of creepy. Would you like your creepy classmate sneaking into your room at night and watching you sleep? Apply this possibility to real life before you write something like this, please, because Edward watching Bella sleep is in no way romantic- it's just plain creepy.
ForgetfulForever chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
You captured Edward's personality perfectly...something I've never managed to do :)

Very nice
Edward-Jacob4ever01 chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
I LIKE THIS STORY! ITS VERY NICE I HOPE YOU CAN MAKE A STORY THAT IS BASED ON THIS STORY AND MAKE VERY LONG AND WONDERFUL JUST LOIKE THIS ONE! PLS CONTINUE! BIG FAN!
Sky-Angel14 chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
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