I realize that many persons do not realize this, but, Kira and Nodoka are abusing Ranma, though not to the same extent as Genma and the Tendos. This crap gets tiresome.

Interesting fanfic with a potential. It makes me sad it got dropped. The grammar is what it is, as a non native English speaker I can understand that. All those hate filled reviews... I don't get you people. Seriously, you want to complain about OC and other stuff? This is fan fiction damn it.

This story had a potential and I enjoyed it greatly, Too bad it wasn't finished.

...you got repeated use of are instead of our among other issues but an interesting start

this is boring why is ranma letting people control him

Ryoga is replaced by a pod person he has to be. he went and looked for ranma in the huge house and found him? ( I just arrived here with Ryoga and I sent him to go and fetch Ranma from the dojo," ) then he found hot water (Ryoga ran into the bathroom in the dojo. He came out a second later in his usual attire and human once more.) How is he not lost? and not attacking ranma pod person

Crappy self insert. OOC Ranma. Sucks ass.

Yeah, Mustang that's a good Japanese name... I mean wtf?

Take your original character disguised self-insertion and shove it. If you want to write about your private fantasies, go ahead, but don't go advertising them as anything but.

not a half bad story don't get down any if one don't like your work this story is good anuff that you should be proud of your writing

Very Cool Story Plz It SooN!

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

This is a great story and i hope you continue it soon.

Like I said in the PM. Looking forward to whenever chapter eight comes out... if it ever does.

Good story.

Please continue it.

update! and mabye a little more interaction between ranma the sailer scouts, and ryoga