|Reviews for Mistaken Perception|
| Kelsey Estel the TolkieNarnian chapter 23 . 3/27/2006
Smarties! *holds out hand* We could all use a bit more intelligence. *nods*
Evesham EVIL! This is psychological torture! He's treating these two, who have already grown up once, like mere children. *laughs* He does NOT know what he is getting himself into. He'd better hope he's out of there before Lucy (and...*glares*...CIFEL!) joins the mix.
Another great chapter, as always, Echo!
| SupernaturalGal6 chapter 23 . 3/27/2006
fab chapter! that evesham guy is getting on my nerves a little bit...anyway, please update soon!
| xXxWhereWillYouGoxXx chapter 23 . 3/27/2006
Ooh that Evesham makes me mad! I hate him! The idea of shipping Peter and Ed off to the Loony Bin. Honestly.
| CoveredInGlitter chapter 23 . 3/27/2006
Oh another brilliant chapter! I love how Peter's so mature...I *despise* Evisham so much right now...ugh. Ooh they're leaving the school soon you said? Oh hopefully, they'll be going to Narnia and not the loony bin!
Post more soon! Oh and I love Smarties but I'm all out so I shall have to get some more next time I'm in Europe...boo (
| Sera and Tails chapter 23 . 3/27/2006
You told me to be calm. How in hell's name am I supposed to be calm now! ARGH! So much possibilites here, my mind is like firing in overdrive!
Wow, I am so excited for the next chapter.
! Cifel's gonna be in the next dream sequence. Hurray!
OMG, I say you update right now. This very moment.
| Spinner Star chapter 23 . 3/27/2006
Hi, ohcEEcho! This is Sentimental Star, apparently, refuses to let me log-in under that penname so I have a new one.
And can I say, you're absolutely *brilliant*? I know I've said it before, and I'll keep saying it over and over again. I've read this chapter twice now, and I've realized just how wonderfully this "game" Peter is playing with Evesham parallels the "game" Edmund plays with Peers. What makes it amusing in an angsty, rather dark way, is neither one is aware of this. Wonder if they'll finally find out?
So Peter's defiant and breaking, Evesham is proud and condescending, and poor Edmund is just plain confused. Altogether that makes for quite an interesting mix indeed, and I'm eagerly anticipating the direction you're going to take this in. They're leaving the school, huh? All I can say is, it's about time. I've been thinking for the past couple of chapters that they really just *ought* to leave the school, or transfer to a new one. Hmm, the possibilities..._-.
As I'm sure you can guess, my favorite scene in this entire chapter is the one at the end, after Evesham leaves. Quite pleased to see Peter got the best of him there, although it comes at a terrible price for him. Seems Peter's sinking into despair again, the poor guy. And Edmund, there to buoy him up and talk some sense into him. But those last ten or eleven lines...::cue ominous bells::
Please update as soon as you get the chance, I'm keeping my eyes peeled!
P.S. Hope your short break went well!
| A Amelia Black chapter 23 . 3/27/2006
good, as always. Their bond is so strong, yet you give them distinction. Evesham...sic Cifel on him! lmao
| Capegio chapter 23 . 3/27/2006
New chapter. Hurrah. This Evesham chap seems to be more loony than Peter and Ed put together, and that's really saying something. I don't like him.
Hm. I think I'm going to bring up now one little miff I have about your style, so don't be offended. You like to write very dramatically, which is fine, but you do so by separating important sentences with paragraph breaks. Sometimes this makes the writing so chopped up that whatever emphasis you wanted to put on the sentence is lost. There are places where I feel it's really not necessary to start a new paragraph, so if you really don't need to, don't.
snitches Cedric and runs
| mzi chapter 23 . 3/27/2006
more peter pls!
| Loper42 chapter 23 . 3/26/2006
You listen so well! I just love it that you updated, kinda, and gave us something to chew on. Or read a million times until we are ready to explode. Anyway, update soon.
| EmperialGem21 chapter 23 . 3/26/2006
First things first, ohcEEcho, you are an amazing author. Your first story was truly an incredible piece to read. It took me a week in a half to read your first one. Cifel is such an awesome character. I love him, he's one of my favs next to Peter. I love Cedric as well. I wish you put more of him in the story tho. Anyways what a tremendous job you have done. I can not wait for your next chapter. Mistaken Perception is just phenomenal. Well done.
| Argentus chapter 20 . 3/26/2006
Oh. So much for Cifel
Just kidding. XD There was nothing remotely slashy about it, not the way you wrote it. Yeah, if I had to do that to a random guy, how much more for my brother? I like the connection you made with Henry and the beach incident. Nicely put: a brother doing a father's job.
I just loved this little part after:
"Edmund felt his eyes well up, and he shook his head, leaning his forehead against his brother’s burning one.
Thank you, Dad…"
Aw! I nearly welled up too! Short but sweet indeed
Dunno if I ever mentioned it but one of the best parts about reading your fics are the hilarious author's notes right after!
| Argentus chapter 19 . 3/26/2006
Whee, Peter! Nice to know he can cross boundaries and not play nicey-nice with grown-ups all the time. At least when Edmund is involved. I'm just grinning broadly at the contrast…first he's asthmatic and subdued, then he renders a psychoanalyst speechless! I never know what to expect from him.
Or from you for that matter. Heh, Peter's inhaler is missing. I sense trouble…
Who's following Ed? Cifel? How the heck did he get into our world?
| IplayedInTraffic chapter 23 . 3/25/2006
I just found this story and I also read your other one Ironic Synchronicity. I love your writtings and I can't wait for more.
| Stormythomas chapter 23 . 3/25/2006
Wow everything is just great. The preview was great, the last chapter was great, everything was great. Sorry for the use of so many 'greats' but this whole story is just so, what's the word i'm looking for...GREAT!:)