|Reviews for Mistaken Perception|
| A Amelia Black chapter 21 . 3/18/2006
great chap as always
Only thing that confused me was the ages in the flashback...you had Ed being older than Peter and so I was just wondering why
Other than that, I definitely liked the end with Peter and the birds ;) Very cool
| SupernaturalGal6 chapter 21 . 3/18/2006
it's kinda funny that the headmaster and that other guy are scared of peter...lol. great chapter...please update soon!
| Stormythomas chapter 20 . 3/17/2006
*can finally breathe again* So glad Peter's alive. Poor guy, you've almost killed him how many times now? But hey who could complain with great chapters like that. Please update soon, i wonder what will happen to the boys now. NEED TO KNOW!:)
| Raebie chapter 20 . 3/17/2006
Who can say no to Peter and Edmund, especially after what they've been through?
Yes, I know I'm a random reviewer, but OMG! That chappie was wonderful!
I was so scared that Peter was going to die...
Again the Peter and Edmund interaction was wonderful! Keep updating!
| jedijaina chapter 20 . 3/16/2006
Great chapter though i shudder to think what will happen to Peter for hitting a teacher, even if the teacher deserved it.
| ehards29 chapter 20 . 3/16/2006
more, more, MORE!
such a good chapter, you're right, short but sweet
| Kelsey Estel the TolkieNarnian chapter 20 . 3/15/2006
Of course I can't say no to Peter! *Suffocates Peter, who has another asthma attack*
Asthma is a terrible condition! Both my sister and my little cousin have it. I was babysitting my cousin once, who is five, and he started having trouble breathing. Luckily, water and fresh air helped, but I can understand how Edmund feels. Modern science should just come up with a cure for it.
Who was it that grabbed Peter BEFORE he fell? Who held him back? It didn't seem as if it was anyone from Edmund's perspective. Did I misread, or was it Edmund?
I love the parts with poor Lucy.
I think Edmund should tell the teachers/administrators that Peter's asthma medicine was stolen. Then, he can blame Peers. This accounts for the incident, the fight, everything. It was all Peers! So what if they're turning the facts a bit? Its all pretty much true. I'm sure Aslan would understand. In this case, the real truth is too complicated and has too many variables. When getting out of trouble, its best to simplify the story.
see you soon!
| A Amelia Black chapter 20 . 3/15/2006
very nicely done
only one fix-it
He scowled, as it slowly filled the vase, thinking. (in Lucy's part. I think you mean she lol)
but otherwise, brilliant! You do intensity very well and you keep us wanting for more
| SupernaturalGal6 chapter 20 . 3/15/2006
| Angel Kathy chapter 20 . 3/15/2006
oh my gosh. Really exciting chapter. For a moment I really thougt: oh my god is he going to die?
At the begining of the chapter I was a little bit confused why Peter was so out of breath? I personally have asthma, too and I know what it is like to have a attack (Im lucky, that it wasnt often), and you really describe it good. Im already waiting for the next chapter! Till then
| Tex110 chapter 20 . 3/15/2006
No! I'd never, ever say no to Peter and Edmund! I shall review!
Bloody, flaming hell, Echo! This was amazing! Truly, and undeniably amazing! Very sad, and very much an adrenaline booster. It set my own heart to racing as I read. Sweet Aslan...If only I were an eighth as good as you are...
When Peter stopped breathing it evoked a tear. Just one, but it did. That, my dear authoress, is the sign of incredible writing.
I loved how Lucy's part in this chapter really contrasted against what her brothers are having to go through right now. It was really black and white, and very vivid.
My turbulent mind, that was a chapter...sweet, living Aslan...I just might freak out unduly if you don't update soon. ::freaks out:: Three cheers for ohEEcho!
Yours while waiting with white knuckles and bated breath,
| Sera and Tails chapter 20 . 3/15/2006
Okay, let me explain something to you. My sister had a terrible cold, and now I have that terrible cold (thanks Claudette, really..thanks alot), and we both have asthma, and its like really hell right now with all the coughing and blowing of noses and the like. And now, I've read chapter 20 and I'm about to have a cliffhanger-induced asthma attack. Contrary to popular belief, peppermint is not all that helpful, so what I need, from you, is another update right away. Or else, I might die, and then you will be less one devoted reviewer.
Hoping that my prescription will be filled as soon as possible, so as to delay my untimely death,
| CoveredInGlitter chapter 20 . 3/15/2006
Aw that was adorable! I love how Peter always comes to rescue Edmund only to end up getting hurt himself, and how Edmund is the one who's always comforting him. Poor Peter...and Edmund. Wow, did Peter actually hit Mr. Henley? Well, it served Mr. Henley right anyway after what he did to Edmund, and Peter's only looking out for his brother. They're gonna be in so much trouble! I can't wait to see what happens. Post more soon!
| xXxWhereWillYouGoxXx chapter 20 . 3/15/2006
e! By the Lion's Mane! I was worried... I thought you were gonna kill Peter.
| Undomiel2007 chapter 20 . 3/15/2006
No! I would never say no to Peter and Edmund! I loved this chapter! Well, ok, I love all your chapters but there was something about this one that I really liked although I don't know what it is. Oh well, this whole story is absolutely brilliant, what can I say? Keep it up!