|Reviews for Runaway|
| Anonyfag chapter 20 . 10/16/2008
Okay fuck it broken crystal? lol no.
| Anonyfag chapter 19 . 10/16/2008
The name drop was entirely unwarranted and almost assuredly not a coincidence.
Retarded in the extreme.
| Anonyfag chapter 18 . 10/16/2008
So are you a creationist, author, is it just characterization at work?
Also magitechnology relies on the mana emitted by the tree of life, and as such is a localized phenomena which could not exist outside a planet's field of influence.
Unless of course you believe the ancients used mana batteries or some device of a similar basis. Not an impossible theory, but I really wish you would stop stapling your own original bullshit onto the canon.
| Anonyfag chapter 15 . 10/16/2008
Writer's Note: OCs are bad things. They never turn out for the better and are ultimately a tool used in an attempt to conceal poor writing.
Your writing isn't so poor as to warrant OCs. Finish off the OC plot lines and pretend they NEVER HAPPENED, yeah?
| Viigor chapter 18 . 5/29/2008
I don't know why you are sorry about the Colloyd moment in the previous chapter (AKA 17). I really liked it: they were "in character" and the disappointment was only for Lloyd... or Collete if you say so abot she being a... slut? Oh well!certainly you're right about that: the justification in the upper AN.
Oh! And the rest of the story is great, of course. It's good to see that checking stories from two years or more pays :)
BTW, I owe you much more than this creepy, dated review, so I'll add my thanks for writing a very good ... the name's fem-slash right? see ya around.
| Gesea4ever chapter 28 . 8/1/2007
GANDALF! NO! that was a good story and all but... now Kraine can never happen. Oh well, and i dont think Genis is an ass, he is aswome!
| Gesea4ever chapter 19 . 7/29/2007
When is there going to be gesea! *whimper* *sob*
| bacon chapter 13 . 6/20/2007
yuan lloyd and kratos?
| yay11 chapter 5 . 6/20/2007
sheena admits(drunkenly,but still)her gayness!
infinite cookies and sake for you!
| Cheea5 chapter 19 . 2/20/2007
Akamatsu,Kinda like Akamaru from Naruto eh? I HAVE BEEN TO NYC! It was fun and shinny and big!
| Cheea5 chapter 15 . 2/20/2007
GENIS! You are so mean to Yuan-kun. Gr. *Fangirl rage* Run little boy run! I DON'T CARE IF YOUR MY THIRD FAVORITE! YUAN IS BETTER! YAY IDIOT SERIPHIM! Did I splell that right?
| Cheea5 chapter 13 . 2/20/2007
know your done but I'm voting any way! Yuan.
| Cheea5 chapter 4 . 2/19/2007
ORUCHIMARUS TONGUE IS CREEPY!*Shiver*
| LittleLinor chapter 28 . 2/17/2007
Woot, I love this fic!
Well, liking the pairing helps, but I like how it's built over time, and how all is not perfect...
Plus, the idea of Kloitz, if far-fetched, was well handled, and did allow for interesting plot development.
So good work
*puts in faves*
| LittleLinor chapter 17 . 2/17/2007
Hehe, I was going to wait for the last chapter to review, but since you ask... Genis is indeed 12, I have the character design book, and the ages are on it, Raine is 23 and Genis 12.
And Sheena is indeed 19