Reviews for Brothers
Guest chapter 2 . 12/8/2013
Since when does Zane scream? This story is so damn interesting!
Passing Through chapter 17 . 2/8/2013
Is it going to be in character this time? Or will you continue to trash two characters just for the sake of your 'ship?
Stormshadow13 chapter 17 . 2/8/2013
Could you put a note on this fic to let us know when the new fic is up?
Coco Gash Jirachi chapter 14 . 2/10/2008
A cliffhanger... damn...

Sorry I didn't review earlier. There's this flamer that had a penname similar to yours that flamed my stories, and I thought it was you because it happened after you updated this... I'm as smart as a bag of hammers and didn't notice right away, so... (slaps self across face). That's for me being as smart as the color yellow...
Stormshadow13 chapter 14 . 1/27/2008
Glad to see you back.

Wow, poor Chazz.

I hope those so called brothers of his meat the most Painful and agonizing death in history.

Can't wait to see what you are going to do.
NightmareGlitter chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
I'm a little bit confused b/c of your syntax and lack of commas, but I like it anyway. I think it's a great idea and I just love the CxA pairing _ Thnx for using dub names. I like them better. And thanks for showing Chazz's manly side. Too many stories (yaoi mostly) have him kinda wimpy, kinda OOC, and has him as the uke. I'm so glad someone finally recognizes how he would react and what he would do for Alexis, or any girl in this situation! He really is a gentleman (despite cussing, that actually adds to his harsher character side) and knows how to treat a lady. If you work on grammar, then it'll be perfect. Oh, and I read ur reviews. Don't get down if anyone flames u. That person doesn't know what they're talking about. A good story is not entirely based on complete comprehension or grammar. Sounds like my English teacher XP Anyway, keep up the good work! This is going on my C2 : )
Coco Gash Jirachi chapter 13 . 7/10/2007
This is intense...
moonlightcherish chapter 12 . 5/31/2007
oh wow, exciting! great chap, please continue updating
Coco Gash Jirachi chapter 12 . 5/15/2007
At least we didn't have to wait as long as last time...
Coco Gash Jirachi chapter 11 . 5/14/2007
... Man! That took you... how long? (Just kidding! )

wolfymewmew chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
This is a hella great story, very dramatic.

SorinDarkraven chapter 9 . 11/18/2006
I think slade and jagger should die and chazz should have it with alexis...good story
Tolken of the Mist chapter 9 . 11/7/2006
This sweet loving story made my mind go around, this story is fascinating! I must say, you had great talent of making readers fuss out of it, ya know! I felt better after reading it! This is great! Though, I was a JadenxAlexis fan, I am also a ChazzxAlexis fan! Can I like both pairings? Anyway, I do hope you will continue with this, I was waiting for this for a long time, if you're perhaps, unsatisfied of lack of reviews, it's time for me to review! Man, I'm too lazy to review! But I swear even for my life that if you ever updated, I will review you, of course! Anyway, a suggestion will do, perhaps? Cause all these incidents about their brother trying to kill "The Chazz" is horryfing to so some readers, oh yeah, you might write more fanfics of Chazz and Alexis since, it's rare for them as a sight-see here in fanfiction... sigh, I hope there will be more, cause I think I already read all the JadenxAlexis fanfics and there aren't any new ones. But hey, I might update my new story soon! *cough* *cough* Sorry, I talked too much... about myself, sorry bout that... But I wasn't always like that, I was trying to get your attention, that's why... I do hope I didn't offend you at all! I just hope you won't! I'm trying to make this long, but I think I cannot. So forgive me, Dark Angel and I shall bid farewell... and before I'll leave... UPDATE SOON, I CAN'T WAIT LONG!

~Tolky :)
BlueGreenGrey chapter 9 . 11/4/2006
Great chapter! I love your story, it's very suspenseful! Hey, ignore whatever flames you may get! This is an awesome story that deserves more reviews! I hope to recieve an update soon!
sleepy tigers chapter 9 . 11/2/2006
I'm sorry, but after reading this through(twice, actually), I've come to this decision.

This is a terrible story.

How could you portray Jun's brothers in such the way that you did? You clearly don't know who they are, because they are NOTHING like that. Chosaku and Shoji are high ranking financial and political experts, NOT rapists. They are completely OOC, along with Jun. I don't know why you would make a story like this, but it is poorly written, not just because of the OOCness, but because you have spelling and grammar mistakes, and you clearly have no idea who the Manjyome brothers are. In the few episodes they were in, sure, they were a bit crazed, but they didn't physically harm Jun, they just pressured him a lot. And they would NEVER harm Asuka, and they would NEVER kill a girl that Jun liked. In the episodes they were in, they were nothing like how YOU made them in your story.

I HIGHLY suggest revising this, or getting rid of it. There's no good future for this story if you keep it going like this.
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