Reviews for For the Family
Elsiah chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
I'm not a big poetry fan but wow, that was fantastic. You captured every emotion dead on. Great work!
lost-katana chapter 1 . 2/10/2006
Wow. That was amazing!

Good job!

~Pi90katana
Longing for Leo chapter 1 . 2/10/2006
Aww, poor Leo & Splinter...full of misunderstandings. Sigh, I'm so glad Leo's realized that he's been his "own worst enemy." :) Great job capturing his hardness!
FF Demon chapter 1 . 2/10/2006
wow

Normally I don't like poetry, but this one...It amazing. So little words to say so many emotions.

I like the PoV switch.

great work.

take care
Tewi chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
oh wow! omgosh! i can't believe it! that was great! loved how you switched between perspectives! and how you told the story and not just feelings! so awesome job! right on! or write on (hehehe)!