|Reviews for Making Mr Right|
| Creator-tan chapter 8 . 10/10/2013
This was the single greatest AU fanfiction I have ever read. It seemed...real. Like real people, living their lives. This was massively entertaining. I adored just how cliche should have it seemed (with the general idea and all), while, well, not being cliche. This story still felt genuine. You were able to let me see Garfield Logan, and Kori Anders, and Raven Roth, as people, and to be able to separate it from the teenage super heroes, but still keep a sort of connection. You dig? Usually, with AU stories, I can't picture BB without green skin and hair. That's the thing, though. This wasn't BeastBoy, this was Garfield Logan. They're the same person, but just in an alternate universe. This story is what all AU stories should strive to be. To keep the same characters, as people, and separate them from their original universe all together. Easter eggs and little references or hints are fine, but it's when I can't get over that Star can't fly, that things should change a bit.
I enjoyed this story immensely. There isn't anything I can say that might make it better. I can't even say anything about the first person, which I usually don't enjoy, but you used it to your advantage. Other than a few typos, this is perfection in what it is and what it's trying to be.
| noname00 chapter 8 . 8/29/2012
After reading the summary I just had to check this fic out and after the first chap I realized that I read this fic already but I loved it so much I just couldn't stopXD
Bright part is that I didnt remember the ending but like I said before I loved it and it was a joy rereading it
| ERLAN chapter 8 . 12/9/2011
W0w! I l0ve it even th0ugh im n0t a bbrae fan!
| AzurexJen S chapter 2 . 11/27/2009
Oh... lol... I can just imagine the chaos! I cannot wait to read more!
| AzurexJen S chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
Wow... she is in deep shit... excuse my language but, WOW! I'd love to see how she's going to get out of that one.
| piratechicka chapter 8 . 7/19/2009
Aw, great chapter! I loved how you encorporated the wedding date with it! It sucks that you're done writing though, I thought that you were an excellent writer, and find it unfair that you decided to quit, even though you've got a real knack for it. Oh, and the ending cracked me up!
| reader chapter 8 . 5/9/2009
this story is awesome
i loved it!
thank you for writing this
i really appreciate it
| davestridersjunk chapter 8 . 4/16/2009
Your Name Means Roughly Wise And Intelligent Master,
Will You Consider Writing An Epilogue ;D :P ?
| lonely heart chapter 8 . 2/14/2009
love this story made me cry. it so sweet. if i could make a recommendion can you write a story using beastboy(gar) and raven useing the movie how to lose a guy in ten days. since you did a great job with this one i beleave you could make a great one.
| Rose Red and Snow White chapter 8 . 1/2/2009
Doesn't Magister mean 'master teacher' or something? It's Latin right...?
| lovingo0Kawaii0oGirl chapter 8 . 11/16/2008
i loved it ! keep up the good work and tnx for writing it!
| Juleskat101 chapter 8 . 9/13/2008
| Juleskat101 chapter 5 . 8/21/2008
YAY! i have no damn idea why, but YAY! lol love the story so far! i luv how gar flirts with her like how bb would flirt with rae!
| Juleskat101 chapter 3 . 8/21/2008
| Juleskat101 chapter 2 . 8/21/2008
yay! ohh terra's goin' down!