Reviews for New Beginnings
NarHina chapter 7 . 7/28/2016
It was good, but the part with Tsunade and Naruto day was kind of to much, Tsunade is 50 something you know there's not a 5 year gap.

Though all the fluff and demon and god stuff was good and wish for more, probably a rewrite or something and make it more canon like uses Naruto father real name Minato, since you write this before it was known.

Also don't make Naruto and Hinata leave leaf for training over a long time and have them actual be genin for a bit.

Though it was good spin on Naruto being a half demon and if though it was strange I enjoyed the village of the guys.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)
NarHina chapter 1 . 7/27/2016
Good but your spelling Hinata wrong you put Hinta.

Like the cute Naruto and how he has Hinata symbol on everything. chapter 1 . 8/18/2015
Hey Aengus. has any one adopted this fanfic yet? If so who?
JSemillano chapter 7 . 3/5/2015
I like the story
No,i love it . . Really really love it . .
Pls update it sooner im looking forward for the next update and the ending . . Thanks ;)
Maruka21 chapter 1 . 10/4/2014
awesome love the fluff :)
Guest chapter 3 . 7/6/2014
God bless America, the old pedophile is dead...
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2014
KamiIsGod chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
The first part sounded like gay pedophile. Butan overall good story sorry for the rude comment also! :) -.-'
senuyasha chapter 1 . 1/18/2014
good job so far
Hecseferblade chapter 7 . 11/17/2013
Loved it, anxiously waiting for more if you do update
RisingMist chapter 5 . 11/26/2011
This is the last chapter I'm reviewing. I'm going to read and review the other chapters only if I decide I want to apply to adopt the story from you. The fluff was nice as usual. Some of the humour was good too. There were other things that bothered me, but I'm not going to get into it. Why? They're basically issues I've already highlighted in the previous chapters.

Thanks for sharing.
RisingMist chapter 4 . 11/26/2011
Lots of little problems here. The two main ones-

1. The Yondaime looking like a dumb blonde.

2. The weird habit of ignoring canon. AU is well and good. But you should know the difference between Sennin (sage) and a member of the Sannin (three ninja).

Good luck.
RisingMist chapter 3 . 11/26/2011
I'm annoyed now. You've overdone the Harry Potter references. The first one was funny, the rest were just annoying. Having the Yondaime alive usually pisses me off. However, there is a chance that it could work out well. I'll hold my tongue till I read more. I'm annoyed that Naruto didn't tell Hinata about the fox. That is inconsistent with his character in the story. I noticed that you're getting rid of the Akatsuki as well. Who're going to take the place of the main villains? I hope that these things will be addressed when someone adopts the fic. It certainly will be, if I end up adopting it, with your permission, of course.

Thanks for sharing.
RisingMist chapter 2 . 11/26/2011
Well, ninjutsu and genjutsu when combined shouldn't really alter the landscape, as I understand it. Powerful ninjutsu alone, could do that though. There were a few other errors and inconsistencies, but the length of the chapter blew them out of my mind. You need to get another set of eyes to go over the chapter with a fine tooth comb.

Good Luck!
RisingMist chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
I started reading this story because it was up for adoption. I'm not sure that I want to adopt it yet. I do know that I like the start. Beats me if I know why I like it, but I do! Forgive me, but I won't be doing a critique of your story or any of the individual chapters. I'll let you know if there are any huge problems that I spot though. :)

Thanks for sharing.
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