|Reviews for When the Clouds Roll In|
| Winter Bean chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
Oh wow this is really really really good and I really mean it please please please write more fics
| azna-azure chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
very well written
i like the way you portrayed the feelings of the characters. it's angst-y and very deep. i can actually feel the anguish of both cagalli and athrun...(wait...i can? nvr mind)
even though this is one-shot fic, i can't help myself from thinking that you could write more (yeah, me and my stupid brain...) it was all because although athrun found his comfort, cagalli kinda did not. she looks like she is sacrificing herself (i mean she's bottling her emotions: sadness etc.)
but, oh well, like i said, maybe it was just me:3
anyway, first story or not, it's good don't ever degraded yourself.
| Sunflower Seeds chapter 1 . 2/10/2006
Nice Fic! Write more!
| ovp chapter 1 . 2/10/2006