Reviews for Tryst
ryancooperinlondon chapter 1 . 2/16/2016
I know this was written 10 years ago but I just read it now and need to say this.
WOW just WOW, how did you manage to create such a beautifully written piece?
It is so short and yet packed with feelings and emotions. Tears actually started rolling down my cheeks without warning at the revelation. I ended up accepting the sad feeling and cried my eyes out.
Is it because you painted such a perfect picture of love in the first paragraphs that the twist was even more painful to find out? It's a rhetorical question. Probably.
I just needed to say how beautiful this short story was. I don't have the words to say how gifted you are, not everyone is able to write such a short piece and make the reader cry in such a way. And from the reviews I've read, I'm not the only one.
Congratulations, that was absolutely perfect. Art.
Dr. Trunks Briefs chapter 1 . 3/17/2015
I... I did not see that coming. This was beautifully sad... Now I gotta go read some happy Truhan D:

Thanks for writing!
CherryPie13 chapter 1 . 3/6/2014
(Why do I want to cry? Oh, it was just that good.)
Char chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
loraven888 chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
give me a second...

i need to recover from this great sadness that sudenly decended apon me.




ok im good now.

that was great. i loved how you never let the people surrounding trunks react in a way that would give away his death with the exception of gohan; and that was assumed to be guilt for betraying his wife.

truly a fic to be proud of.

thank you
mei chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
I like it it's somthing new.
Rayne chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
Very good. Having Mirai Trunks as a ghost in this story was an interesting turn of events. Despite it being short, I didn't feel any sort of...incompleteness about it. A very satisfying read! :)
achen92 chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
me was such a sad really good one 2.

even though i haven't watched dragon balls in a long time and basically forgot everything about it P
WhiteRibbons chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
Myu~ I was feeling down, this was a good story for me at the time -

I like how you made it suspenseful, I seriously didn't know he was dead until the end~!

This was a pretty story, cute and everything 0
kt chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
That was beautiful. I loved it.
kara chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
I liked it. kinda sad but I liked it. poor Gohan
illsprawl chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
Ouch. Heartbreak contained in two thousand words.

This is nice.
Warrior from beyond chapter 1 . 9/7/2007
Wow, that was very good. very well written
happychica chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
Nice plot twist.
Mirai Kurosaki chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
Aw, it was so nicely done. Wonderful job on everything!
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