Reviews for Heartbroken
anime-queen46 chapter 1 . 3/26
cute and so true about heartbreak, I have felt it once or twice myself. Well done :)
jinlsmileXD chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
really cool of you to show the reader that vegeta has affections for her
xSapphirexRosesxFanx chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
It's a miracle Vegeta didn't kill him.
crazykk2 chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
Awe man I absolutely love the last 6 paragraphs of this!
Queen Elenya Hawk chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
Heartbreak is a really awful word... I got sad just by reading its description. One thing I noticed is you've repeated a few words in a same paragraph. You should try to use synonyms or change a sentence a little so you don't mention it twice. For example, instead of "it feels like you will never be the same again or your life will never be the same again", maybe you can use "it feels like neither you nor your life will ever be the same again". Another thing is the last sentence. There's nothing wrong with it but I don't think it's necessary, Vegeta's words were enough to tell me that would be the beginning of something, but I guess it's just a matter of likes. In general it was very nice, sad, but with the final idea that everything will be fine and things will be coming to place. And Vegeta is lovely
TheMusicalWindmill chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
the last sentence was my favorite part ]
Musette Fujiwara chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
yeah heart broken are really worse each time they happen...

but Bulma had some one with her to be with her...
Shashuko the Paisley Maiden chapter 1 . 10/7/2006
fluffiness XD

so cute! Is this supposed t oneshot?

If it's not, up-date-soon!

Domo arigato, VeryShortMidget
Blonde-Existentialist chapter 1 . 9/2/2006
So little of a begining, and some much of it an expose, but it all ties together nicely and clearly at the end.
D4cHilliN chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
cute. another great one
cryingtide chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
Simple, short, but very nice.
MissBlaze chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
hey gr8 story, now im goin 2 read ur oter 1's kk

LUV YA LOTS

Meow55 xoxoxoxoxooxox
Hasten chapter 1 . 6/22/2006
That was sweet and cute.

I liked it, and frankly, I'm happy that Bulma and Yamcha broke up. I really never liked them together.

I'm not completely sure why that is, but they always seemed wrong for each other, in my opinion.

Vegeta and Bulma are perfect for each other.

Well,

Here's another great VegetaxBulma fic.

I enjoyed it. (:
Lady Kayura chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
I love it! You have to make another chapter and explain more of the story! I can't wait!
moon2stars142000 chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
hey i love it

u should make more chapters u know go in to more detail

M.
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