Reviews for The Little Ones are Hope
sapphirekitty chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
You could describe the scene better. It doesn't really capture the LOTR atmosphere. When you write a story, don't just focus on the dialogue. Put some consideration into the setting, too.
Inwe Nolatari chapter 1 . 2/21/2006
That was sad...good...but sad all the same...well...as I always say...keep up the great work...yu no...i am getting tire of saying that to everyone...but...i'm to lazy to create something else...oh well..keep up the great word...again...-sigh-

Laters,

Inwe