Reviews for To be an Elfling or not to be an Elfling
BrightGreenNails chapter 9 . 10/2/2013
Curinir if you TOUCH my Leggy you DIE!
BrightGreenNails chapter 3 . 10/2/2013
Legolas stop being so UNFUN!
BrightGreenNails chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
Aw MAN! Great. Just perfect.
MichAdommyMaroon5 chapter 18 . 7/15/2013
Loved it! You wrote it very well, had a great plot and I hadn't noticed one grammar mistake. Although it was written in '06 and it is '13 now, I couldn't help but review. It was cute, sweet and also very tensive and exciting. It was a pleasure reading! I'm looking forward to read the prequel and possible other stories you might have.
ann chapter 17 . 7/22/2012
OMG! Legolas isn't going to go into a coma is he? (I assume that the dreamer is Legolas)
Minimatt chapter 18 . 10/27/2010
I liked this story.
werecanigeteyeslikethose chapter 18 . 2/25/2006
yet another good chapter i love this story
LOCISVU chapter 18 . 2/25/2006
Why short?More please.
Tecnokitty chapter 18 . 2/23/2006
yay, i liked it! i hope the prequel will be as good
Inwe Nolatari chapter 18 . 2/23/2006
Don't tell me your going to end it now...why...*starts getting teary eyed* you can't do this to me...it only started...18 chapters ago...please do more...pertty pwease...um...question...It seems that Elrond knew that Saruman was evil...so why did he seem shocked and devestated in the movie...I know this is a fan fiction...but...still...lol...great job and hope to read more soon!

Laters,

Inwe

P.S. I am adding you to my favorite authors list!
Tecnokitty chapter 17 . 2/22/2006
whoa, freaky. I would hate to have that dream
Nina chapter 17 . 2/21/2006
Yay! You updated... and with three new chapters! *dances*! Well I've been meaning to review this story but I always forget so here it goes.

I found a few grammar and spelling errors...

In Chapter 15...

The stood up and looked out of the back stall they had been in.

Not sure if you mean't "The two or They".

I guess we were to tired.”

I think you meant too.

At this, the two Lords and the Captain of the Guard wen down stairs.

You forgot the t in went.

Don’t leave the house. Both nodded their heads.

A quotation mark is needed after house.

In Chapter 16...

Legolas looked out over the whole of the city, looking for.

Don't know what you meant here. Maybe his daddy? Possibly the Twins?

He wouldn’t happen to have had blond hair and blue eyes,

You don't need the had there, I think.

Okay maybe not a few lol. Anyways, I love the story and the whole idea of Legolas and the twins as elflings is just adorable. Please keep updating!
elfchildofgrace chapter 4 . 2/21/2006
i love it i think that legolas needs a real gook swat on his backside.

[ oh did i really say that ]

keep it up hope to read more soon
Inwe Nolatari chapter 17 . 2/21/2006
Holy shiznick...that was creepy...damn you Saruman...grg...anyways...great job on the story and hope to hear more soon!

Laters,

Inwe
LOCISVU chapter 17 . 2/21/2006
Could that dreamer be Legolas?
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