|Reviews for Holy Roller Novocaine|
| clint eastwood chapter 10 . 2/11/2007
wow man that's some heavy shit.
| Lapus chapter 12 . 3/14/2006
Wonderful writing, so glad to hear there will be a part 3.
Can't wait to read it.
Again well done!
| Lapus chapter 11 . 3/13/2006
Story just keeps getting better and better.
Great stuff, keep it coming.
| Lapus chapter 10 . 3/1/2006
*goes for kleenex box*
Great now I'm all weepy *sniff*
Wonderful writing, I don't know how you do it. Your stories get better with every chapter you write.
| Lapus chapter 9 . 3/1/2006
I love it! Go Scream go!
| navycorpsman chapter 8 . 2/27/2006
Black Hawk Down meets Over There! I LOVE IT! :)
Is there more? Huh? Huh? :)
| kika-sama chapter 5 . 2/19/2006
Hey! (guess I never left a review on this story - too lazy to check it out).
Well, about all chapters, hilarious parts! Underpants having trouble with food, and the way it finds out to get out... makes me laugh!
I have a question about chapter two: Did was Silas carring a M4 or a M9? Because you said that he put his M4 aside, and later you said that he soot the woman with his M9? Did I had missed something?
So, uh hu... Jamila is haunting sargeant? I don't like her anymore! (just kidding).
Always someone think more than Underpants, right? Guy is a Jackass...but was a shame he died anyways. I would like to see him suffer for not being obeyied by the others. His face was so funny! I can bet he was so pissed off when Gen. wanted to talk with sgt. Hotness instead of him, that teorically was on charge...
Well, I'm waiting for new chap. Ok!
| Lapus chapter 3 . 2/15/2006
Jesus Christ! Thats worth 100's of millions!
Gods what temptation to take the $ and run Hhehehe!
Great story, love it!
Fantastic writing, keep up the great work.
| RocketBooster chapter 2 . 2/13/2006
Another great chapter. The tie-in from 'Al Hadith Hilton' at the end of this chapter was unexpected but very well done; I could actually picture the look on Screams face.