|Reviews for Lutey's Knife|
| Kima-Mitsura chapter 5 . 8/12/2008
Very interesting! What happens next?
| epalladino chapter 5 . 1/2/2008
Yes, it was a short update, but so evocative and creepy. That moss was wonderfully grotesque and the scenes with Roger were wonderfully portrayed. Can't wait to see what's next. Thanks, Beth Palladino
| epalladino chapter 4 . 11/27/2007
Fantastic update. I already liked this story, but like it even better now. Can't wait to see Hellboy's confrontation with Fatin. Thanks for continuing on with this story, Beth Palladino
| epalladino chapter 3 . 11/23/2007
Intriguing third chapter. In the first chapter you say that this will be a three chapter story. Yet, this seems not to be complete. I hope there will be more, because you've got me really interested. Thanks, Beth Palladino
| CorpseBride777 chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
I'm liking the story. People need to write more fics with Roger.
| boogalaga chapter 2 . 12/6/2006
Very nice; I love the twist. And I like how the mermaid isn't evil or anything. Though I hope you don't make her too humanistic. (Is that even a word?) I've always pictured Sirens as being distant enough from our world and veiwpoints that on some things they can't even understand our way of thinking.
Good for Roger, and I'm looking forward to Hellboy's reaction.
One thing I'm going to complain just a little about (as it is only a little thing). Your chapter is just the slightest bit rushed. The action sort of blurs together. I personally need more time to digest what is going on in a story; get the feel of the changes in plot and such. You'll probably want a second opinion on that. But it's out there for you to take or leave.
I eagerly await your next chapter.
| epalladino chapter 2 . 10/23/2006
Interesting chapter two. I like your take on Roger. Can't wait for chapter three. Funny thing, it claims to have three chapters, but I can only see two. Hope to see the next one soon, Beth Palladino
| boogalaga chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
I went and read Lutey and the Mermaid, you're right, it is beautiful. So far I like it, but I would appreciate it if you wouldn't put the dialog in italics. I start to get into the story and it throws me out. Also, maybe (this is something which varies from author to author so don't worry too much about it) you could include some of your character's thoughts, just something I personally enjoy. As I said, don't worry too much about it.
I'm going to babble for a moment, I have to do that after I read something I like. With Lutey and the Mermaid, I couldn't help but picture the men in the family accepting the punishment for they felt the gift to heal people was worth it. It sounded like that's what Lutey did. He healed people and broke curses, then he willingly went to the sea. Is that just me or did you get that too?
Either way, I'm really looking forward to seeing how this develops. I hope you update soon.
| epalladino chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
Great! A new story. Looks interesting. Can't wait for the update. I agree with Shadowcat, however, why the italics for the dialogue. Other than that, this looks really great. Beth Palladino
| theshadowcat chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
Another story! YEAH! But what is with the dialogue being in itallics? At any rate, please hurry with the next chapter.