|Reviews for What Do You See When You Look At Me?|
| iGogoTomago67 chapter 9 . 9/22
Please! Keep this going! Its awesome! :D :3
| kungfubijuu100 chapter 9 . 8/17
The comment filled with 'PLEAS'es was me :v sorry XD(too lazy to login Xv)
| Guest chapter 9 . 8/17
PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE U HAV TO CONTI DIS *le me putting obvious intencional bad orthography XDXD* THIS IS AMAZINGLY AWESOME AND EPIC, PLEASE, IM BEGGING YOU, THIS IS TOO AMAZING NOT TO BE CONTINUED, PLEASE, I'VE READED EVERYTHING IN ONLY 1 DAAAAAY TnT your fic is really god btw :v
| Frozen chapter 9 . 7/14
This story is from 06 probably I still wanted to compliment u on such a fun read. Naughty hinata hehehe
| jaschan3883 chapter 9 . 5/4
Where have you, r u even alive. Just finish the story love ...
| Hinatta chapter 1 . 3/15
I'll add this story to my Hinata Community
PM me to be staff or if you know of any others!
Look for it here: ...
| CrystalBud chapter 6 . 6/23/2014
love this story :D
| Shan chapter 9 . 3/23/2014
Why is there not another chapter D:
| Shan chapter 7 . 3/23/2014
Absolutely love this chapter! Their personalities are exact and it's really easy to see these two together!
| RedBunny28 chapter 9 . 9/19/2013
Hey, please update faster :( I have been waiting sooo long for the next chapter.. Btw, I love Your story ;)
| aryaputra chapter 9 . 7/22/2013
This is one steamy GaaHina fic. And the fact that you kept the characters as in-character as you could screams dedication and hard work.
I really hope you continue this. :)
| CrystalBud chapter 4 . 7/18/2013
this is awesome :D
| CrystalBud chapter 2 . 7/18/2013
this is really cool, I hope that you haven't given up on it
| AiDiOs chapter 9 . 7/5/2013
Jumping jelly beans! Why hasn't this amazingly awesome story hasn't been updating since 2006?! Are you trying to drive me completely and utterly insane?! Please, for the love of all things GaaHina update this story immediately. I will be all types of disappointed and sad and angry and heart broken if you don't. Please?
By the way, it's freaking awesome!
| Eenvi chapter 9 . 1/14/2013
It's weird to see Hinata's personality suddenly changed from a shy timid girl to loud and harsh one when she found Gaara reading the book. I just can't imagine Hinata to yell Subeke at Gaara, she's too shy for that, unless you want to make an ooc of her (but then I don't see any ooc warning..)
And about Hinata's short hair during childhood, if her father thought long hair would hinder her from any missions and ninja stuff, why would he grow his own hair long in the first place too? It would be much more convincing if you add something like "she was an incompetent shinobi and long hair would just add more distraction to her".
And I don't feel the development of her relationship with Gaara is rushed, since each chapter you wrote is considered long (and probably because I read in a really slow pace and stopped here and there for a couple of minutes before resuming lol)
Are you still continuing the fic? I think it's a promising story with interesting plot, would be glad to know that you still haven't given up on it.